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  • Other » General, General
    Re: Mictest

    Hi @Kushalarvind I'm here to do a very short review on your work. So I'm guessing this might have been a test to see how things work on the sight, ...

    Mar 2, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Alone but not lonely.

    Hi @AilahEvelynMae I'm here to do a really short review on your poem so lets dive straight in shell we! :) I love the title for this I feel like ...

    Mar 2, 2024

  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Lighterio and Candlet: Lighterio

    Hi @AilahEvelynMae I am her to do a very short or long review on you story so lets jump right into it shall we. Overall Thoughts This was such a ...

    Jan 13, 2024

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Elders of the Stars

    Hi @TimelessMage I'm here to do a very short review of your poem, so let's jump right into it shall we! Overall Thoughts I love how you kept rhyming throughout ...

    Jan 13, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: and she would darken the memory

    Hi @creaturefeature I'm here for a very short review, I'm calling it the compliments review XD, so lets get to it. I love how this started and ended it's so ...

    Jan 12, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: PftPP- Chapter 2.2

    Hi @FireEyes it's Doss here finally with another review, I haven't reviewed in awhile so I might be rusty but let's jump right into this shall we!! Okay so since ...

    Jan 12, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Blood, Lust, and Royalty Ch.1

    Hi @alexxei I'm here to do a short review on your chapter so lets jump right to it. Thing's That I Like The dynamic of the story so far is ...

    Nov 2, 2023


  • Wow this hit home for me with the dad this is how fights go with my dad especially when I was younger, and my sister has a boyfriend that I ...

    Oct 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: PftPP Chapter 2.1

    Hi @FireEyes hope your doing well, I'm here to do a short or long review, either way let's jump right into it shall we! Thought's so far Thought I'd do ...

    Jul 11, 2023

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: One Last Game

    Hi @RokitaVivi I'm here to do a quick or long review ether way, so let's jump right into it shall we! before we get stared if I say something that ...

    Jul 10, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic
    Re: You Were Once There - Chapter One

    Hi @theoclaurent I'm here to do a quick review on your chapter, so lets jump right into it shell we. A nostalgic rendition of the piano piece Clair de Lune ...

    Jul 10, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 7.2 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind here for another review on your novel, so lets jump right into it shell we. About the chapter and Characters I really enjoyed this chapter sound, I always ...

    Mar 1, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 7.1 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind I'm here to do another review on your novel. :) let's jump right into it shell we. Things that I've been noticing 1: Okay I'm going to be ...

    Feb 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 6.2 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind its me again for another short/long review. I'm going to try doing something a little new with this review so hope you like reading the review. Lets dive ...

    Feb 27, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 6.1 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind I'm back to do another review on the next chapter, I'm so trying to catch up right now. So lets get into it shell we. James woke with ...

    Feb 26, 2023


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