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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Blood, Lust, and Royalty Ch.1

    Hi @alexxei I'm here to do a short review on your chapter so lets jump right to it. Thing's That I Like The dynamic of the story so far is ...

    Nov 2, 2023


  • Wow this hit home for me with the dad this is how fights go with my dad especially when I was younger, and my sister has a boyfriend that I ...

    Oct 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: PftPP Chapter 2.1

    Hi @FireEyes hope your doing well, I'm here to do a short or long review, either way let's jump right into it shall we! Thought's so far Thought I'd do ...

    Jul 11, 2023

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: One Last Game

    Hi @RokitaVivi I'm here to do a quick or long review ether way, so let's jump right into it shall we! before we get stared if I say something that ...

    Jul 10, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic
    Re: You Were Once There - Chapter One

    Hi @theoclaurent I'm here to do a quick review on your chapter, so lets jump right into it shell we. A nostalgic rendition of the piano piece Clair de Lune ...

    Jul 10, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 7.2 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind here for another review on your novel, so lets jump right into it shell we. About the chapter and Characters I really enjoyed this chapter sound, I always ...

    Mar 1, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 7.1 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind I'm here to do another review on your novel. :) let's jump right into it shell we. Things that I've been noticing 1: Okay I'm going to be ...

    Feb 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 6.2 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind its me again for another short/long review. I'm going to try doing something a little new with this review so hope you like reading the review. Lets dive ...

    Feb 27, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 6.1 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind I'm back to do another review on the next chapter, I'm so trying to catch up right now. So lets get into it shell we. James woke with ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 5.2 (LMS VI)

    Hi @soundofmind I've been meaning to do a review on this for awhile so let's get right into it shell we. Was she lucky? Or was this too good to ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Curse from Ekho - Chapter 2

    Hi @cosmicsnail30 I'm here to do a short maybe long review on your novel, so let's jump right into it shell we. Alec silently stalked through the forest. It was ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: after years in the desert

    Hi @Lovestrike I'm here to do a short review on your wonderful poem here, it's been a while since I did a review on poetry so I'm sorry if I'm ...

    Feb 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Mist: Chapter Five

    Hi @Ari11 I'm here to review this last chapter you have, I'm going to make the most of this one, let's dive into it shell we. :) Three hours and ...

    Feb 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Mist: Chapter Four

    Hello again @Ari11 I said I'd try to get to this chapter today as well, and I well here I am, so lets dive into it shell we. Okay so ...

    Feb 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Mist: Chapter Three

    Hi @Ari11 I'm here to do a short review on this, I'm sorry it took so long I wasn't feeling very well, but let's get straight into it. Albert opened ...

    Feb 25, 2023


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