Dobby1998

Thanks, and sorry about the grammatical error, I know it makes a big difference. I'm glad that you like it, as I think it's important to know what others think ...

Thanks, and I've just realised my grammatical error, you're right, it's a simple mistake; but it does make a difference. I think that as I continue to develop it, I'll ...

I love the style of your writing, it flows really well!! Some of the adjectives you've used are really interesting aswell, I think it's fantastic.

I think this could be a quite a good start to something :)