Dingobabee

Thank you so much ^^ I worked hard on it and hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as the prologue.

Thank you for the review ^^ Unfortunately, this was all I wrote and I think all I will write on this subject.

Thank you so much, I'll get it edited soon. Possibly flesh it out since you like it. :)

Glad to say that I was able to repost this with Paragraphing and better punctuation. :) Hope you like it better.

Yeah, I don't know what happened. I copied and pasted this from Word and most of my punctiation and all my quotation marks were turned into question marks and my ...

I just want to clarify some things here since it might be a while before I get a chance to post an edited version. The tense switch was the story ...

Thanks for the review! One of my friends is currently going over it and correcting grammer and spelling mistakes. I'll be sure to go through and edit very soon and ...

Wow, I love this! It's such a good tone for the story you are trying to convay and the last line is perfect!

I'm new too, but I think you could copy and paste it onto a new post in poetry and then just delete this one.

Personally, I would havew put this under poetry. I also like the contradicting lines because creativity does come in bursts and flows delicately. :D