Young Writers Society

Hello there, Despondence dropping in for a quick review! I'm going to start with your strong points. First off, even though this was extremely short for a first chapter, you ...

Hiya, Despondence stopping by for a review :3 Hmm... Very interesting short you got here. I rather enjoy the concept you have of a woman attempting to escape from a ...

Hello~ Dropping in for a review! ^^ Positives first! Your concept made for a rather good twist at the end, and it made me chuckle a bit for some reason. ...

Hello there! Dropping in for a review :3 Starting with your positives, you captured the scene of what it was like to be a slave very well. From how hard ...

Hiya~ :3 Oh gosh, where do I begin... There was a lot of things to like here! Your description and telling of all the events were smooth as silk, and ...

Hello there! I'll be dropping in for a review on your work here. Now, first off, you have a lot of potential here, but I feel like just a few ...

Ahh, I really like this piece... How you were talking to those who over-analyze poets, even the personal choices they make. How poets don't always have the best lives, and ...

Hiya! I really like this poem! It was simple, fairly short, but it left me with a feeling of freedom, or longing to stare at the stars in the night ...

Going with the positives first, this poem was really great! I liked how you presented everything, set the mood perfectly. And with the interpretation that children crying are much like ...

Starting out with some positives, you seem to have a good idea here, but it was so short that it didn't keep me invested long enough. It seemed your shortness ...

First off, I really like your writing style! I clung to the end of every sentence and kept going, waiting to see what would be done. Despite this being short, ...