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  • Poetry » Romantic, Other
    Re: Rain to my rainbow

    Hi! I'm reviewing something after a long time, so I hope you don't mind if I blabber. The first thing which came to my mind on reading this poem was ...

    Sep 2, 2017


  • This poem of yours was excellent, as usual. I guess it was not written in your usual style, but had the magical Kays touch anyway. Beauty, realism and dreams shone ...

    Aug 20, 2017

  • Article / Essay » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: I would frown

    Hi! Welcome to YWS!! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. I think the message of your essay is a powerful one. I like it. However, I feel you ...

    Jul 30, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: confusion

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. Wow! I love this poem!! You are such a talented writer. I did not notice any grammatical errors as such. The ...

    Jul 30, 2017

  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic
    Re: Martha

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. This poem is a very powerful one. I loved it! I did not find any grammatical errors as such. The words ...

    Jul 30, 2017

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The job

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. First of all, this story is awesome. I loved it! As alliyah said, you began the story well on a nice, ...

    Jul 29, 2017

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: Through my fractured eyes...

    Ok, so I understood the poem very well. Its about the blurry things which we see when we don a pair of spectacles (if our vision is alright) or remove ...

    Jul 29, 2017

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Teddy

    This story is so sweet. You wrote it well with a soft, sensitive touch. I loved it! The story was absolutely flawless, with no errors either in the grammar or ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Weird.

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. I don't know if its weird or something, but most of these questions haunt me as well. Your poem is detailed, ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Other » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Undertoad: A cute human

    Hi! Welcome to YWS!! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. Like LeutnantSchweinehud, I, too was surprised on seeing that the work has been rated 18+. I mean, Mario ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Addiction

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. This poem is so beautiful and relevant! I loved it! The words were crystal-clear and flowed softly like water. Moving on, ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Stress

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. This poem of yours is so, so honest and true. I loved it! The words were well-written and punctuation marks were ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Seasons of You

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. Your poem is so beautiful! I loved it! Feelings and emotions were expressed in a very nice manner. This poem is ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: Apathy

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. First of all, this poem is 100 percent true. I loved it! Everything is so perfect and beautifully written that there ...

    Jul 28, 2017

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: I Lost My Shoe.

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. First of all, your poem was very humorous and dramatic in the funny way. I loved it and can also relate ...

    Jul 27, 2017


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