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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic
    Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 2)

    Reviewing again here!:D I like this, its good. It flows on well from the first part... which i'm presuming must have been the prologue if this is chapter one? Anyway, ...

    Aug 6, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror
    Re: Dance with Death

    The title is good. The poem is too! I like this, its got hidden meaning, I can't decide what to think of it really, only that it is good... I ...

    Aug 5, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 1)

    This is good, seems like something i'd like to read and love. There is a point where you say "soon as i walked through the door..." I'd change it to ...

    Aug 5, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: You're Gone.

    This is good, i like it. it has a story to it.. kind of like a heartbreak sort of thing? It seems like you have gone through it, it's like ...

    Aug 4, 2012

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: My Own Girl

    I like this, it's got a very good meaning behind it... the insecurities girls tend to have, but you are saying so what? your you, and you cant change it. ...

    Aug 4, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Trade Me: Prologue

    This is good, i think there is a bit of punctuation missing, but oh well, this draws us in, sound really interesting, lookingforward to reading more, if there is some ...

    Aug 4, 2012


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