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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Williwaw Chapter 9

    Hey Mess, Clary here to finally review again for you. I’m just going to dive in and point out everything I noticed that could be improved or that I really ...

    Oct 11, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health
    Re: for lack of water

    Hey there alli, Clary here to finally review this for you! I have to start by saying that I really admire your work, and if I was to see this ...

    Oct 4, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Williwaw Chapter 6

    Hey there, Mess. Long-time no speak – I see you’re still digging the same avi and it’s marvelouuuus. Anyways – onto the task at hand! I’ve skimmed over the first ...

    Sep 12, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: lightning promises

    Hi there, erilea. It’s Clarity here to do a review for you. I was a little turned off by the layout of this since it just goes line to line ...

    Sep 10, 2018

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: Deleted 91

    Hi Lumi! Clarity here to review as requested. I’ll start by saying I found this very emotional and beautifully written. I really love unconventional structure of poetry (and you obviously ...

    Sep 9, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other
    Re: Own My Soul - ​Chapter Three (And A Half)

    Hi there! Clary here to do a review for you. To start – love the character names! Very fitting. hopping up onto the table and stalking around and around I ...

    Sep 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Equator in Zhulong 2.1

    Hello! Clarity here to do a review for you. First off let me start with the fact that I haven't read your previous chapters and I picked this from the ...

    Sep 2, 2018

  • Poetry » General, Fantasy
    Re: The one.

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS. I'm guessing "the one" is a person considering some of the things you have used to describe them, and that you refer to "the one" ...

    Nov 19, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: My skelton response

    Hello there, grace! I think you have done a wonderful job with this poem, it was a pleasure to read. My skeleton you are not just an alignment of calloused ...

    May 5, 2014

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: the last jillionth moment

    Hello, Savvy! Welcome to YWS! :D This is a good poem. You have some great imagery and I like how you word everything. Before I get into any detail, there ...

    May 2, 2014

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Love at first sight.

    Hey there, retro. All of the poetry I have read of yours has been amazing, I really like it. And it's quite astounding as to how often it appears in ...

    May 1, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: A Love Like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

    Hey there! So, I saw the title and was like... "I have to review this". I have not yet watched this, nor do I have much background information on Dr ...

    Mar 27, 2014

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Decisions

    We don't get to be upset. We all have our jobs to do. And mine is reviewing. (Recognise the first two sentences? Huh? ;) ) You better do. XD Anyways, ...

    Mar 14, 2014

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Re: Weeping Angels

    Ooooh, a Doctor Who fanfic! I haven't seen one of these in a long while... I like how you've used the Weeping Angels because they are one of the most ...

    Mar 10, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: ​​​​​​​Evening Out

    Hey there! Clarity here for a review. So from your title, I assumed that this was going to be about an evening out somewhere. Then, I read your description and ...

    Mar 3, 2014


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— Hank Green