Young Writers Society

Hey Mess, Clary here to finally review again for you. I’m just going to dive in and point out everything I noticed that could be improved or that I really ...

Hey there alli, Clary here to finally review this for you! I have to start by saying that I really admire your work, and if I was to see this ...

Hey there, Mess. Long-time no speak – I see you’re still digging the same avi and it’s marvelouuuus. Anyways – onto the task at hand! I’ve skimmed over the first ...

Hi there, erilea. It’s Clarity here to do a review for you. I was a little turned off by the layout of this since it just goes line to line ...

Hi Lumi! Clarity here to review as requested. I’ll start by saying I found this very emotional and beautifully written. I really love unconventional structure of poetry (and you obviously ...

Hi there! Clary here to do a review for you. To start – love the character names! Very fitting. hopping up onto the table and stalking around and around I ...

Hello! Clarity here to do a review for you. First off let me start with the fact that I haven't read your previous chapters and I picked this from the ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS. I'm guessing "the one" is a person considering some of the things you have used to describe them, and that you refer to "the one" ...

Hello there, grace! I think you have done a wonderful job with this poem, it was a pleasure to read. My skeleton you are not just an alignment of calloused ...

Hello, Savvy! Welcome to YWS! :D This is a good poem. You have some great imagery and I like how you word everything. Before I get into any detail, there ...

Hey there, retro. All of the poetry I have read of yours has been amazing, I really like it. And it's quite astounding as to how often it appears in ...

Hey there! So, I saw the title and was like... "I have to review this". I have not yet watched this, nor do I have much background information on Dr ...

We don't get to be upset. We all have our jobs to do. And mine is reviewing. (Recognise the first two sentences? Huh? ;) ) You better do. XD Anyways, ...

Ooooh, a Doctor Who fanfic! I haven't seen one of these in a long while... I like how you've used the Weeping Angels because they are one of the most ...

Hey there! Clarity here for a review. So from your title, I assumed that this was going to be about an evening out somewhere. Then, I read your description and ...