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  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Sep 8, 2011

    Did a cute braid with my hair today *really mom did it* and when I opened, my hair was all curled up. Looked kinda great!!! :-) :-)


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Jul 7, 2011

    Posted a new chapter...
    Hey guys! Please do check it ASAP!!!!!
    topic83874.html


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Jul 5, 2011

    Did a review today(finally!!!) and I'm already tired so going to sleep but maybe I'll have to clean my room 'cause it looks like a dustbin...
    Anyway, see ya guys!


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    May 31, 2011

    Hey guys... this is rooh, I've changed my username to ChocolateMoonLight....
    Just so you all don't get confused...;-)


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    May 16, 2011

    What's the protocol in novels when you are trying to generate curiosity and at the same you are you suck at descriptions?!
    Help guys! I'm writing a new novel and i get stuck at describing a particular scene perfectly and it's affecting my 'curiosity' part...;-)


    Lava Work on descriptions! Really, they'll help. Read Shrubbery's article here : topic75361.html

    Edit and rewrite!

    May 16, 2011


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Apr 26, 2011

    Good Afternoon YWSers!


    Snoink LOL! Goodnight! :)
    Apr 26, 2011


    Lava D'affernoon!
    Apr 26, 2011


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Apr 19, 2011

    Hi guys, I have put up story in the general fiction story category. The story is the revised and improved version of the previous story I had put up.
    I hope you all like it.....:-) :-) :-)
    Please do review it......


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Apr 5, 2011

    its a pleasure, guys...:-)


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Apr 1, 2011

    *For Youngsters Only*
    .
    A valuable thought to all girls and boys for lifetime,
    .
    "Cry Only For
    Cuts & Stiches,
    ...Not for
    Bastards & Bitches..!! :-)


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Mar 30, 2011

    Hey! guys, I have put the first part of the story I'm working on. Please review it and tell me how is it so far....


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Mar 26, 2011

    thankx a lot guys......i'm working on a story and i am going to put it for review in few days time :) :)


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Mar 24, 2011

    recently joined this fabulous site.....
    i'm a young aspiring writer, so guys please help me reach my goal by reviewing my work and commenting on whatever short stories i put up........<3


    Alpha Of course we will! Welcome to YWS, by the way!
    PM me for anything. ANYTHING. Anything at all!
    Well, see you around!
    Cheers!
    Alpha
    *follows*

    Mar 24, 2011



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— Kate Chopin, The Awakening