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  • theotherone
    Jul 5, 2011

    Thanks for the review, it helped. :) Also, the next chapter should be up tomorrow... I'm hoping it would anyways, it all depends on how I feel when I come back from work. ;)


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Jul 5, 2011

    Did a review today(finally!!!) and I'm already tired so going to sleep but maybe I'll have to clean my room 'cause it looks like a dustbin...
    Anyway, see ya guys!

  • Wanna see something cool? Go to google, type in 'google gravity' then press I'm feeling lucky. Woa!
    (And happy late birthday!)


    ChocolateMoonLight thanks!!!!!
    Jul 5, 2011


    ChocolateMoonLight Hey I checked it out and it's totally cool!!!!!!!!!!
    Jul 5, 2011

  • Happy Birthday =) 'Hope your day is great! I'm Ceely, by the way, nice to meet ya.


    ChocolateMoonLight Thanks a lot !!! I'm ruhi, nice to meet you too...
    Jul 3, 2011


  • theotherone
    Jul 2, 2011

    Thanks for the review. :) I would like though that you tell me a little bit about what you though of it... It's always good to know what is good and bad in your story so you can work on it. ;)

    The next chapter should be up tonight at the latest. :)


  • EloquentDragon
    Jul 1, 2011

    Thanks for the review...
    Yes, I'm seriously considering turning it into a novel...eventually...


    ChocolateMoonLight Hey PM me whenever you do it, I would love to read the whole version...!!!!
    Jul 2, 2011

  • :O
    Roohster! The name change confused me


    ChocolateMoonLight Now you know, right?
    Jun 2, 2011


    Lava ;)
    Jun 2, 2011


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    May 31, 2011

    Hey guys... this is rooh, I've changed my username to ChocolateMoonLight....
    Just so you all don't get confused...;-)


  • iampaulop
    May 31, 2011

    You're welcome. Just what I thought. She is running away from her father :)


    ChocolateMoonLight It's a relieve to know that you even understood it...:-) :-)
    May 31, 2011


    iampaulop ahaha... Can u review my work? Thanks, I have a problem with my grammar so I hope you can help me... Reomi:prologue[new] ... dont open the first one, that's a waste :) hehe
    May 31, 2011


  • fireheartedkaratepup
    May 25, 2011

    By the way, just wanted to let you know--I liked the pictures you posted on DC fans. I'm just looking for pictures that depict the heroes a whole, like a close-up of a mask or something.

  • hey rooh! The train was earlier than I thought. I'll review once I get a comp with internet.


  • MadameLuxestrange
    May 21, 2011

    Thank you for the review!


    ChocolateMoonLight Hey! That's what we do here right and you can ask for a review anytime you want.
    Keep Writing...
    -rooh-

    May 22, 2011


  • MiaParamore
    May 17, 2011

    You're welcome. I am glad that it was helpful. That's what I really wanted, and it's an honor if somebody benefited from my article. I am not going to be online for a month, so I'll review your thing if you post it before that. :wink:

    Peace,
    Shrubs


  • ChocolateMoonLight
    May 16, 2011

    What's the protocol in novels when you are trying to generate curiosity and at the same you are you suck at descriptions?!
    Help guys! I'm writing a new novel and i get stuck at describing a particular scene perfectly and it's affecting my 'curiosity' part...;-)


    Lava Work on descriptions! Really, they'll help. Read Shrubbery's article here : topic75361.html

    Edit and rewrite!

    May 16, 2011


  • ankitjain
    May 9, 2011

    Thanks a lot for review. I really appreciate it. :)
    You're kidding right?!?.. Of course, I am on Fakebook.. Opps!.. Facebook.. Why don't you provide me your link? I'll add you there, if you want me to..
    If you'f like to read further chapter then, please check following links:
    Chapter 3: topic80646.html
    Chapter 4 : topic80647.html



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— Ley