CharlotteGrace

Hey I liked it. It's different. Charlotte Grace

I liked it a lot. It shows the actual struggles of an american teen mom and the father not wanting a part of it. It brings out who these people ...

Hey. I loved the story. I just had a little confusion with there being no spaces in between the paragraphs but other than that it was golden. Charlotte

I completely agree with Megsug. The time line is very conflicting. I need it to be clearer than what it is. It just confused me even more.

I liked it.

Not too shabby. I wonder how it will turn out? I've only read this one but I will read the rest. *Charlotte Grace

I think that it was okay. It wasn't the best story I've read but it was good nonetheless.

I liked it a lot, but I was a little confuzzled. The way you typed it, It confused me. I had a hard time defining the paragraphs. That's really the ...

I like it a lot. I love the tale of Robin hood and how people put their own spins on it, and so far I'm liking your spin on it. ...

Thanks for ya'll's advice.I'll remember it when I write the next installment. -Charlotte Grace

I agree with the others. It needed some work but over all I liked it a lot.

Hey! I love the story line of it but I'm a little confuzzled about who the main character of this book is and what it's about. I think you should ...

I liked it but I agree with the others.

I actually liked it a lot, but there are a few details about what the character is wearing. I think that you should slowly reveal clues about her and not ...

I like the whole forbidden love thing. So naturally I liked it.