CelticaNoir

Needs even more space! :D Reminds me of a famous musical piece called 4'33 by John Cage--there's a video on YouTube of a pianist walking to the bench, sitting down ...

Thanks! I think I remember you from when I used to be more active haha. I will definitely think about the perspective here though, I really appreciate the criticism. Thank ...

Woah, Tenshi. Just, woah. I loved this piece, and you have such a way with words it's kinda impossible to nitpick anything at all. Also, what is this about an ...

Thanks for the review, Temi :) I'm glad you liked it :D

You just commented on it too! :P

Hey Morrell :D I've long since scrapped this novel and shelved the idea (so it may be used for future ideas instead) but thanks for the review. I'm not as ...

Hey Ahem! Ames reporting for duty. Sort of. Anyway. I'll get this straight up: I wish you had more description in your writing. Without description, your writing feels a little ...

This is NOT a review. Just a comment. ;) That aside. This is wonderful---ly literal and nonsensical. You should post more of these! We all need a laugh now and ...

Okay, Name, so this is the second version of the review I was going to post...and a shorter one, unfortunately. But here I go. Character and dialogue-wise, I found it ...

Thanks everyone, I really appreciated your criticisms!

Thanks Tanya. I'll keep all that in mind!

xDDD This is freaking awesome. Keep doing this stuff so we can (get completely screwed up) laugh moar!

Thanks Ten! Your review was mui appreciated. xD

Thanks guys! *beam* I think I might turn this into a novella after I finish writing my current one. Yup.

Thanks Dragon Lady! :D I just want to explain one of your statements here: you said that Fakia had been wronged by Mute, but that's not the reason why he's ...