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  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Marie Antoinette

    Hello, dear. Since this is the first review I have done of your writing, let me know if you need anything explained or that my handwriting is illegible. 1. I ...

    Oct 30, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Papillion (1)

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you need help deciphering my handwriting or have any questions, feel free to PM or poke me. Hope this helps. Ta, Cal.

    May 24, 2010

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Romanov

    Hey, honey. I swear your poems are like candy; I gobble them up. I totally did this critique a while back, but when I tried to post it my scanner ...

    May 24, 2010


  • Hey, honey. This again, like Romanov was a poem that I critiqued quite a bit of time ago. But my scanner was being evil McEvil face about stuff, so I ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Under a Bright Blue Sky

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. Feel free to PM or poke me if you have any questions or cannot read my handwriting. 1. Stanzas I believe you poem would ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Rentre ?? la Maison: Come Home

    Hey, honey. So sorry it took me this long to post a critique. Life happened. Rather forcefully I might add. So here we go. If you have any questions about ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you don't understand my handwriting/scrawl or anything else needs to be clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. 1. The ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General
    Re: "Sepia" Rewrite

    Hey, hon. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or need anything clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. Tada. I really like this ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Cursed

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or want clarification on anything, don't hesitate to poke or PM me. 1. Do the Punct! I believe ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: "Insomnia", a small character analysis

    Hello, dear. So here is my spiel. If you can't read my handwriting or if you want something clarified, please feel free to PM or poke me. :D Now onto ...

    May 24, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Alice: Chapter One

    Hi, LavenderBlue. First off, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. Here we go. Other Things I. Alice Alice seems ...

    Mar 6, 2010

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Of Jinn and Devil

    Hello, Dreamworx. First off, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. So, here we go. So apparently, my scanner did ...

    Mar 6, 2010


  • Hi, NaRachel. First off, if you have any questions or need any help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. :D Off we go then. So apparently, my ...

    Mar 6, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Shrive: Chapter 1

    Hi, honey. So, again, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. I. Letter Writing I like the letter at the ...

    Mar 6, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Shrive: Prologue

    Hiya, darling. You know the drill. If you have any questions or my handwriting is illegible, please tell me. I like how the prologue is in present tense. It gives ...

    Mar 6, 2010


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