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Hi there! Thank you for reviewing "That is why bullets make better friends"

However, I don't quite understand what you're getting at. I thought the meaning was quite clear: the narrator is pointing out the glaring flaws of another person, commenting on what a bad friend that person is ('That is why bullets make better friends), but also noting that this behaviour is human nature ('This is the way the world will end'). The last stanza is the twist in the tale, because the narrator admits that he loves the very person he (apparently) hates so much, but the narrator knows it will never be... Is this clear? Or is it still confusing?

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