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  • It was my pleasure!

    If you need any more help, be sure to let me know. With a bit of editing, you'll be fine. Your writing itself is good and fun to read, you just need a bit of tweaking here and there. Good luck!


    Angela Thanks!
    Dec 12, 2010


  • Jashael
    Dec 11, 2010

    hey, I'm sorry if I"m taking so long with the review. I've got a long list now. XD and I have SB, soooo I hope you can wait. XD

    wow...that's great! I was rejected when I passed one. When I was Grade nine...but pffft.... XD I'm glad I found this site, 'cause here is where I really had my tenses consistent... =)) that was my problem at first


  • MiaParamore
    Dec 11, 2010

    Hey, Angela. *love the name*...I'll review yours soon...and welcome to YWS..late welcome, sorry! :wink:


    Angela Thanks so much!
    Dec 11, 2010

  • Hey, Angela.

    I'm just letting you know that I haven't forgotten about your review! As long as everything goes to plan, I'll be able to get to it by tomorrow at the latest.


    Angela Thanks so much! I hope to read it soon!
    Dec 10, 2010


  • MeanMrMustard
    Dec 6, 2010

    My Kittie is cuter than your pug. You have no threads.


    Angela What are threads?
    Jan 13, 2011

  • CUMBERSPAM! :D

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    (this better work or I'll look like an idiot XD)

    'CUMBER' IS LIKE, THE BEST PREFIX EVER. IT MAKES ANY WORD INFINITELY BETTER.

    "I'M DRINKING CUMBERCOFFEE"

    "COULD YOU PASS ME THE CUMBERSPOON?"

    "OH MY GOD, IT'S A CUMBERCOW!"

    "I MADE A BATCH OF CUMBERCOOKIES!"


    Angela OMFG!!!!!!! *faints* That wink is addicting... *winks; fails miserably* You are so right about that prefix. Might I suggest making it a suffix? As in... CUCUMBER!! This guy is pretty much MADE of food.
    Benedict = Benedict eggs
    Cumberbatch = Cucumber

    I love it. We are such geeks. AND FANGIRLS!!!!!!! *high-five*

    Dec 6, 2010


    Kiwisatsuma I knooww, that wink is like, CYBER IMPREGNATION, practically. If such a thing existed it would be that. When I attempt the wink I look like some kind of sleazy wannabe pirate. D:

    Hee, yes, that would work too. Like that painting of a guy made out f food, except him, made entirely out of eggs and cucumber. An edible sculpture. It would be terrifyingly brilliant.

    WE ARE. BUT THE BEST KIND OF GEEKINESS AND FANGIRLYNESS. THE AWESOME KIND. :D :D

    Dec 6, 2010

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  • Angela
    Dec 5, 2010

    I'm back!! And listening to Johnny Cash. So sue me.


  • theotherone
    Nov 20, 2010

    No problem, you can PM when you have re-write it, or have another thing you want me to review. Don't hesitate! :)

  • I shouldn't think so... Hmmm...

    Report it in the Report A Site Bug thread, and see if anything can be done. :)

  • You are very welcome, you can ask me again anytime :]


  • Angela
    Nov 19, 2010

    Hello everyone! I just wanted to post in and say that chances are I won't be on much for the next week. Out of town=Little computer time. Life sucks. I just posted 2 new stories, so it would be muchly appreciated if you could be bothered to review them. Please? Have a good week and keep writing!


  • borntobeawriter
    Nov 14, 2010

    Awwww cute avvie


    Angela Holy crud! *blinded* That is one crazy-bright penguin! Love it!
    Nov 14, 2010


    borntobeawriter haha. I know! But isn't it cute? <3
    Nov 14, 2010

  • Heh, I've found you! I didn't even have to stak you for too long...


    Angela May I ask who this is who has DARED to stalk me? Don't you know proper stalking protocol? Generally, if you are stalking one person, they should be allowed to stalk you. It's our own little Stalking Fest!! Siriusly, (hp pun) who is this?
    Nov 13, 2010


    Ligea 'Tis one of flowers and Miri blossoms. And I have been trying to stick to it all the while...hehehe. A Stalking Fest is a wonderous event, and it would be wonderful to hold one soon! Siriusly, I just dropped an anvil-sized hint, but here's another one; Fred. Now if you don't know me, you've got a sirius (HE! Again..) case of amnesia.
    Nov 13, 2010


  • Angela
    Nov 11, 2010

    I'm on a posting streak! 2 days, 2 new posts. I'm so proud! *happy tears* ;)

    Just kidding. I've had that sitting there for a while now. But could you review anyway?


  • Angela
    Nov 10, 2010

    I hath created a page for Benedict Cumberbatch (scorching-hot british actor). Check under my info to find the link!


    PaperCrane Bleeee... he's not attractive =(
    Nov 10, 2010


    Angela *shrugs*To each their own, I guess. Still... I beg to differ...
    Nov 10, 2010

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