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Hello there and welcome to YWS. This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poetry. This sounds very nice, and the way it's writing is different. But ...

Hey there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment your poem. It's short and sweet yet has a great message. The lines also rhyme well together. Welcome to ...

Hello there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment about your beautiful sonnet. While reading it, I know already that it was written by Lim. I ...

Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment your story. Because it is short yet it has impactful small words and phrases. Anyway, to the review. It ...

Hiii there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. This poem is great. I cannot believe that the young writers there are very sad. Because ...

Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment about your poem. You feel anger and pain at the same time whenever you read this ...

Hey there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment because this poem of yours is just so...painful. It also got some great descriptions and you ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. You can see that people have different perspectives on the topic of ...

Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. I see this is very famous and that it is in the literary spotlight but it ...

Hi Lim! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. This reminds me of a board I have on Pinterest and it has many cats, flower ...

hey there! this is loveissourgrapes, and I am here to review your poem. this poem should be 18+ or 16+ because of some words the very young writers not might ...

hellooo! this is loveissourgrapes back with another review. yeah, and i'm back because i'm on a little break, but i'll be busier in the next few days. *nervous giggles* First ...

Hey there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give your beautiful poem a review/comment. I find it raw and beautiful because of how the narrator describes the person ...

Hey there! This is loveissorugrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment. This is one of my first times reviewing fanfics in this site. because I haven't found ...

Hey there! This is loveissourgrapes sending a review/comment for your lovely story. Very imagery. As Joyce stepped out of the car at the post office, she looked out at the ...