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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Loneliness

    This poem is pretty relatable. I used to feel this way when quarantine and the pandemic hit. I like how this could be lyrical as well. And every time I ...

    Dec 5, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words

    Wow, this poem is really nice. I like how you described words into many things and how words can be very powerful and impactful to the people you talk to. ...

    Dec 5, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Darker Than Destiny

    Hello, I'm here to review your story because I found it interesting even before I entered this site. I love how you show your characters but not fully because as ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Take me Home

    Hello, @stygianmoon17. First of all, I like how you described and made home look nice. Sometimes you have to separate from other people and places and stay home. Staying in ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    First of all, I like how you put your thoughts together making it into this poem. This poem is well-written and imaginative, like you can empathize with the person who ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Cue

    Wow, who hurt you? I never been to a situation and relationship like this but, it's painful to read. It reminds me of those old sad love songs Mom and ...

    Dec 3, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Clown

    Wow! This is such a nice story to read when you don't know who you are. When I read it, I felt all the sad and heartbreaking emotions in those ...

    Dec 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Gabriel’s special Christmas!

    Hello, @vampricone6783. This is short story of yours was a very interesting and an unexpected one. I was like I want to read something related to Christmas so I went ...

    Nov 30, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy 18th Birthday YWS

    Wow! I love how much you put your effort, love and support to YWS. It is a nice poem I would like to frame these words on my wall but ...

    Nov 30, 2022


A true poet does not bother to be poetical. Nor does a nursery gardener scent his roses.
— Jean Cocteau