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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Go Where The Wild Flowers Bloom

    Hey, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a little comment or review. First of all, I do like the neatness of each verse and I like the ...

    Apr 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Merci (Thank you)

    Hello, I am here to send a review/comment about your poem. Merci is a beautiful word yet you make it more beautiful writing this piece. The first line made an ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: just a draft to spite my boyfriend

    Hello, this is AkuRashomon! I miss reading @LadyBug 's poems. The font is really pretty by the way. Is this a photo or there's a font like this in YWS? ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: death by sunsets and stars

    Omg, @Quillfeather and @EllieMae made a poem together. Nice cover art too! This AkuRashomon giving a comment/review. Maybe I wasn't drowning, but flying too close to the sun blinded by ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Find Passion in Teaching

    Hi, this is AkuRashomon. And I am here to give you a review or comment. The story has a really good meaning, it is just that there are some areas ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Lover boy

    Hello, I am AkuRashomon. I am here to give you a comment or a review. The title reminded me of a song I keep hearing on social media so I ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Rewrite version of Ready for love with a lot of inspiration and useing some of its own orginal lyrics' parts

    Hey there! AkuRashomon is checking in for a comment/review. You also seem new here. If you need some advice, you can ask me or anyone with dark green and light ...

    Apr 16, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Short Poem for the Stars

    Hello! I am AkuRashomon and I am here to give a comment/review. The title gave me interest because I love the stars and literature about them. Magic starlight in the ...

    Apr 5, 2024
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Your comments

    Hello, @angelinamar! I am AkuRashomon. I love the edgy and angst in this piece, and the fact that I am listening to rock while reading this is a vibe! It ...

    Apr 5, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: everyoneaskedaboutyou

    Hello, @envy! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to tell you a review/comment about your work. I also have been reading your poems/stories and I found them very calming ...

    Dec 10, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Smell of Midnight

    Hello there, this is loveissourgrapes! Yes, I'm back because my exam week is over for the first quarter of school. I wen to YWS and I landed on this imaginary ...

    Oct 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: dear twelve, i love you -sixteen

    Hello again. this is loveissourgrapes and I know it has been a long time. but here's a review for your poem. I love how each stanza is like a story ...

    Sep 29, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The monster within | Chapter One |

    Hey. This is loveissourgrapes. I know it has been a while since I have reviewed something because I am really busy with school. I nearly misspelled my own username because ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You're like coffee....

    hey there! This is loveissourgrapes and I ma here to review/comment on your poem. It's so romantic but it's not that obvious at the same time. I like it. It ...

    Aug 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Chickens, General Re: The Haiku's Predicament

    Haya! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to comment/review about your poem. I love that it is short, clever and sweet. The description of this poem is also good. ...

    Aug 18, 2023


october smells like being ten years old and not scared of anything
— dissonance