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Re: Go Where The Wild Flowers Bloom
Hey, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a little comment or review. First of all, I do like the neatness of each verse and I like the ...
Apr 27, 2024 -
Re: Merci (Thank you)
Hello, I am here to send a review/comment about your poem. Merci is a beautiful word yet you make it more beautiful writing this piece. The first line made an ...
Apr 20, 2024 -
Re: just a draft to spite my boyfriend
Hello, this is AkuRashomon! I miss reading @LadyBug 's poems. The font is really pretty by the way. Is this a photo or there's a font like this in YWS? ...
Apr 20, 2024 -
Re: death by sunsets and stars
Omg, @Quillfeather and @EllieMae made a poem together. Nice cover art too! This AkuRashomon giving a comment/review. Maybe I wasn't drowning, but flying too close to the sun blinded by ...
Apr 17, 2024 -
Re: Find Passion in Teaching
Hi, this is AkuRashomon. And I am here to give you a review or comment. The story has a really good meaning, it is just that there are some areas ...
Apr 17, 2024 -
Re: Lover boy
Hello, I am AkuRashomon. I am here to give you a comment or a review. The title reminded me of a song I keep hearing on social media so I ...
Apr 17, 2024 -
Re: Rewrite version of Ready for love with a lot of inspiration and useing some of its own orginal lyrics' parts
Hey there! AkuRashomon is checking in for a comment/review. You also seem new here. If you need some advice, you can ask me or anyone with dark green and light ...
Apr 16, 2024 -
Re: A Short Poem for the Stars
Hello! I am AkuRashomon and I am here to give a comment/review. The title gave me interest because I love the stars and literature about them. Magic starlight in the ...
Apr 5, 2024 -
Re: Your comments
Hello, @angelinamar! I am AkuRashomon. I love the edgy and angst in this piece, and the fact that I am listening to rock while reading this is a vibe! It ...
Apr 5, 2024 -
Re: everyoneaskedaboutyou
Hello, @envy! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to tell you a review/comment about your work. I also have been reading your poems/stories and I found them very calming ...
Dec 10, 2023 -
Re: Smell of Midnight
Hello there, this is loveissourgrapes! Yes, I'm back because my exam week is over for the first quarter of school. I wen to YWS and I landed on this imaginary ...
Oct 25, 2023 -
Re: dear twelve, i love you -sixteen
Hello again. this is loveissourgrapes and I know it has been a long time. but here's a review for your poem. I love how each stanza is like a story ...
Sep 29, 2023 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter One |
Hey. This is loveissourgrapes. I know it has been a while since I have reviewed something because I am really busy with school. I nearly misspelled my own username because ...
Sep 4, 2023 -
Re: You're like coffee....
hey there! This is loveissourgrapes and I ma here to review/comment on your poem. It's so romantic but it's not that obvious at the same time. I like it. It ...
Aug 20, 2023 -
Re: The Haiku's Predicament
Haya! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to comment/review about your poem. I love that it is short, clever and sweet. The description of this poem is also good. ...
Aug 18, 2023
