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Abid155

  • Questions and Answers Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)

    Hi Guys, i was a frequent user of this site because i believed the response by other members was exceptional when it came to posting your poetry or other work. ...

    Sep 9, 2012
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Evidence Has a Story

    Wow Great poem, honestly the ideas you put on to paper is astounding. As I have stated before I think your imagination is what excels you from many others. I ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Twisted Conclusion

    Part 1: Good Evening My name is Roger Blake, Im a casualty of a critical mistake Identified as clinically insane Sectioned, constricted and detained The last thing I can recollect ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Listen To My Thoughts, Even When Speaking

    Can I Borrow Your Ear For A Moment?  She said:  "Listen to the recollection of all the memories of my past relationships Allow your eyes to make me feel precious ...

    Dec 25, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)

    Hi Guys I was wondering, what happened to the coin system? Where you would have to have 100+ coins to post a piece of your writing I thought it was ...

    Dec 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Can I Borrow Your Ear For A Moment?

    Can I Borrow Your Ear For A Moment? She said: "Listen to the recollection of all the memories of my past relationships Allow your eyes to make me feel precious ...

    Dec 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: From Me To You.

    The duty of the definition of beauty makes me wonder if the word should be dubbed as a blunder Since The English language has no clue, I guess it should ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Push

    Hmmmm this poem is interesting, i love what you said but i believe you could of presented it much betterPush, pull Thrust , shove Never stopping, never moving. That’s the ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Conversation With God!

    I got up without a heart beat But I remember being in my blacked out jeep As i was waiting on a traffic light when i got approached by a ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mental Destruction

    I feel like my Brain is demented,  As Im in a huge state of depression From the early days I was sectioned  I was crazed with numerous painful injections Always Under ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Screams in The Night

    This poem has a real dark and gloomy concept to it and the language you use really engages the reader and allows them to sink everything you are trying to ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Focused Eyes

    Wow this poem is amazing, i have come across a lot of poem's but none like the concept of this one. The concept is what struck me the most, as ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: From Me To You

    The duty of the definition of beauty makes me wonder if the word should be dubbed as a blunder Since The English language has  no clue, i guess they should ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Together forever

    I Like The Gesture That It Was For Your Gran, Which Is Beautiful cause I Got One Myself and I Wanna Write a Poem About Her But I Honestly Think ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Free Babar Ahmad

    What can i say? This piece of work defines the word beautiful, As a poet myself you realize the meaning of the message and how its conveyed by the language ...

    Nov 4, 2011


the only theft here is of decency when carina decided to rob me of my pride and put me on a banana
— veeren