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  • Snoink
    Feb 7, 2011

    Hey Sivart! :D


  • megsug
    Feb 6, 2011

    Thanks for all of the reviews. I definitely agree that Marcus was more developed. I think I connected with him more than I did Lila. Welcome to YWS.

  • Screw Facebook, I'm addicted to this now! Haha


    jujubean05 Me too!!!
    Feb 6, 2011

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    MoonlightAssassin Same! XD
    Feb 7, 2011


  • Button
    Feb 6, 2011

    Thanks again! :)
    I'm quite fond of that stanza as well... don't plan on changing it at all. : )


  • lovethelifeulive
    Feb 6, 2011

    Thanks for the review, I appreciate it a lot!
    And I noticed that you just joined! I am so glad that you got to reviewing and posting immediatly! I hope you will read part2 when I post it, thank you!


  • Nightshade
    Feb 6, 2011

    Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS :)

  • Packers!


  • Button
    Feb 6, 2011

    Thanks for the review! :)
    And a belate welcome to the site to you! If you have any questions or anything, please feel free to ask; I'd love help. Hope you like it here :)
    -Coral-


  • Demeter
    Feb 6, 2011

    Thanks for your comment on my poem, even if it's nearly three years old :D


    322sivart Haha, no problem.
    Feb 6, 2011


  • ArcticMonkey
    Feb 6, 2011

    Welcome to the site! Also, thanks for your feedback, I'll think more about the characters relationships between each other.


  • TabbyGirl
    Feb 5, 2011

    Hello, my name is Tabby, and I'd just like to tell you...

    #00BF00 ">WELCOME!!!

    hmm... dude, you're going to need some sort of nickname :P


    322sivart people call me alex haha
    Feb 5, 2011


  • 322sivart
    Feb 5, 2011

    I'm really beginning to hate snow.



Edna began to feel like one who awakens gradually out of a dream, a delicious, grotesque, impossible dream, to feel again the realities pressing into her soul.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening