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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Is it normal?

    Hey there MysteryMe! Just a quick review from me as my reviewing skills need some brushing up. I'll just start by saying how much I enjoyed this! It was an ...

    Wed May 07, 2014 11:47 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Dearest Abby- Chapter 3

    Hey there, I'm Wiz and I'm going to do a small review for you today. First off, I love Will's character. He seems like he is going to be one ...

    Tue Oct 01, 2013 3:56 am

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: removed by author

    Hey There! Sorry but I'm not a great reviewer :) A few nitpicks: It’s much too early for you to be walking - no less running after the birth you ...

    Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:38 am

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Amazing Grace

    Hey there, Loved this peice but I must agree that it seemed to be over to quickly. I would have like it to go on a little longer but great ...

    Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:34 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Witchlight- Chapter 3

    As usual, LOVED IT!!!! Great work in your writing, any things to change have already been metioned. Still can't wait to read chapter 4 even though I back at boarding ...

    Mon May 02, 2011 7:33 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: XXX

    Hi there, I'm Wiz and I'll be reviewing you. Nitpicks I wait for the plane from my home to the New World to land. I'm really sorry (shouldn't post it ...

    Fri Apr 29, 2011 12:36 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Witchlight- Chapter 2

    This. Is. Amazing. I have fell in love with your writing. It is amazing, but again I can't find any thing wrong with it. Your descriptions are extraordinarily good. I ...

    Thu Apr 28, 2011 8:05 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Witchlight- Chapter 1

    Okay this won't be terribly helpful but I just couldn't find any mistakes This piece was amazing. I have been searching for a great fantasy piece to look at. I ...

    Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:51 pm

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Stains of Red

    This story was interesting, i enjoyed it but it was a bit gory towards the end. Maybe it's just my stomach but I felt a bit sick imagining that. Good ...

    Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:32 pm

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Violin

    Hey tr3x, Okay so my impressions on this were generally good. I liked the way you described how the shopkeeper seemed to like using his customers. I would have liked ...

    Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:45 am

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Romance scene.

    i liked it. slightly creepy but okay, if that's the point. :D :pirate3: :D :D

    Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:43 am

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Horndogs

    not really my sort of thing :| i found it a little disturbing and as said before please rate . :oops: if you like this sort of stuff i suppose ...

    Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:41 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: How to Live - Chapter One

    great great great work. i felt the emotion from Rory coming to me while i read. wonderful effort. if you write and get published ill buy your book! :D :D ...

    Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:06 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: MoonStrike: Chapter 1, 2/3

    hi. I enjoyed this but, (not to sound to mean), i didn't really get the point. All that happened was the fact that she kept eating and eating and that ...

    Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:36 am

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Descendants

    Hey I was immediately hooked by this story apart from a lack of description. I felt that i didn't know the character enough. I only saw one mistake. Her husband ...

    Fri Nov 27, 2009 4:44 am


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