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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Accidental Magic 2: The Second To Last Unicorn-Chapter 2

    I think I’ll read “The Unicorn Quest” books, because unicorns are, as Ellie said, UNICORNS. Onto the chapter. I liked that Ellie climbed the top of the mountain no matter ...

    17 hours ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: Ever After-Season 1, Episode 1

    So why is Mallory friends with the villains? Seems a bit…SUSPICIOUS. I guess I’ll have to find out in the next episode. Snow and Charles must have already switched bodies ...

    Mar 23, 2023

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Blood and Water

    My heart just about burst at the end of the story. The beginning started out harsh but the ending…so heartwarming and sentimental. I agree with Aunt Ludivine that the true ...

    Mar 22, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: devotio

    I enjoyed this story. It was tragic, but I liked reading it. I think that this is talking about wanting something despite the circumstance. In the beginning, the boy wanted ...

    Mar 21, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Romantic
    Re: House of Blood

    This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I particularly appreciate Jake’s nicknames for the villains, they are quite clever and creative. I think that the Faceless Man ...

    Mar 20, 2023

  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural
    Re: The Tooth Fairy

    When Wanda says that the Tooth Fairy is not going to “take another child” from her, does that mean that…Wanda had children before Timothy? Children who also lost their teeth? ...

    Mar 19, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: MaryAnna (S1, E2)

    No one suspects anything for now. Mary is safe for now. I don’t know what’s going on with Martha. Probably something bad. I have a feeling that Mary might get ...

    Mar 18, 2023

  • Poor Arnold. All he wanted was to burn bright, but he melted away. At least he had Ms.Cocoa with him. Both marshmallow and hot chocolate will be remembered. In fact, ...

    Mar 17, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor
    Re: MaryAnna (S1, E1)

    So that necklace must have been important enough for Gloria and Mary to fight for it. Richard seems to care enough about wanting Mary and Alex to have a good ...

    Mar 16, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other
    Re: The Spooky Squad Chapter 2: Giggling Fit

    This chapter is great! If Grace/Giggles were a real toy, I’d totally want her. As for the clowns…oh my god…YOU FOUND MY LONG LOST FAMILY/j! And…that devil horned guy Grace ...

    Mar 15, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: The Vamp: Transylvania Interlude (Part One)

    Oh man…poor Sirena. She trusted György with her heart and soul and he took advantage of her. This origin was beautifully written and very haunting. Sirena loved György, but György ...

    Mar 14, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.1)

    Seems like a good plan to me. But it’s not going to turn out entirely like how Rev and the others want it to, I don’t think. I wonder how ...

    Mar 13, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.0)

    Their nicknames do have interesting stories. They’ve only got each other. They only like each other. I like DC Burk. He’s cool. I do agree that the nicknames are more ...

    Mar 12, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.1)

    Oooh they seem like good friends! I like that. What business do those builders have anyway to build a shop over the other shop? I have a good feeling about ...

    Mar 11, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.0)

    This is interesting. Shoplifting vampires? I can’t wait to read more. I think that Rev might be a vampire, but I could be wrong. (I think that Rev might be ...

    Mar 10, 2023

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