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I loved the way you portrayed this piece of mythology. It’s clear that you put a lot of time and care into them, and for that you get a lot ...
Wed Dec 02, 2020 12:42 am
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Ooh, I'm totally getting Annabelle vibes from this! You should really be proud of this piece, it's amazing. First, I want to point out the formatting. It must have been ...
Tue Dec 01, 2020 7:27 pm
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This certainly reminds me of the Giver in terms of the roles people get (Seer, Storytellers, etc.) It’s a very strong prologue, to me, at least. The most interesting character ...
Tue Dec 01, 2020 2:55 pm
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Aaah, I honestly don’t know how to start off with reviewing this, but I guess I’ll say that I commend you for having the patience to write so much so ...
Tue Dec 01, 2020 2:30 am
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The concept of this piece makes me think of Stranger Things, especially the first episode. I don’t know if this is is inspired by it, but it reminded me of ...
Tue Dec 01, 2020 2:22 am
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This is an amazing prologue. It thrust the reader right into the scene with an incredibly sad, albeit intriguing introduction to Anne’s life. I have a lot of questions concerning ...
Tue Dec 01, 2020 2:01 am
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This is a really sweet poem. I love how it reads like a limerick, it’s simple and goes in an ABAB pattern I think? The perspective you take on is ...
Sat Nov 28, 2020 1:25 am
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