Art » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
Re: The Story of Mother Nature and The Slasher
I loved the way you portrayed this piece of mythology. It’s clear that you put a lot of time and care into them, and for that you get a lot ...
Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense
Ooh, I'm totally getting Annabelle vibes from this! You should really be proud of this piece, it's amazing. First, I want to point out the formatting. It must have been ...
Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
Re: Thief - Prologue (By Amethyst Hendrix)
This certainly reminds me of the Giver in terms of the roles people get (Seer, Storytellers, etc.) It’s a very strong prologue, to me, at least. The most interesting character ...
Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
Re: The Gift of Life
Aaah, I honestly don’t know how to start off with reviewing this, but I guess I’ll say that I commend you for having the patience to write so much so ...
Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)
The concept of this piece makes me think of Stranger Things, especially the first episode. I don’t know if this is is inspired by it, but it reminded me of ...
Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Other
This is an amazing prologue. It thrust the reader right into the scene with an incredibly sad, albeit intriguing introduction to Anne’s life. I have a lot of questions concerning ...
Poetry » Realistic, Other
Re: The Smell of Emotion?
This is a really sweet poem. I love how it reads like a limerick, it’s simple and goes in an ABAB pattern I think? The perspective you take on is ...