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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: It's Not Your Fault

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love the movie Good Will Hunting, and this poem does not disappoint! It is beautifully written, emotional, and ah, makes ...

    Tue Oct 12, 2021 2:37 am

  • Poetry » Health, Realistic
    Re: growing-down

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review. I lovedddd this poem so decided to review it a bit differently by simply walking you through my thoughts as I read: thoughts ...

    Sun Sep 26, 2021 8:46 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Aether's Heart 9.1

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love how much Railyn talks to himself. Incredibly relatable and provides a good balance of comic relief. We get a ...

    Sat Sep 11, 2021 5:12 pm

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: I'm Not

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I loved this poem! I loved the rhymes and it had a beautiful flow that rolled off the tongue easily. I love your ...

    Tue Sep 07, 2021 12:05 am

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
    Re: Never Forget - Part Two - 1 Hours, and 14 Minutes

    Hey, Mordax again to finish reviewing! they were crawling, but not like a baby crawls, like how a dog crawls, on hands and feet, not on knees. Oooh, eerie, I ...

    Fri Sep 03, 2021 12:06 am

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
    Re: Never Forget - 14 Hours, and 28 Minutes

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! Let's jump right in! I will sprinkle in suggestions, my thoughts, and what I liked throughout: The street was quiet, the sun was ...

    Thu Sep 02, 2021 11:51 pm

  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic
    Re: The Baker

    Hey there! Mordax here with a review! I really liked this short story. It was sad, hopeless, and dark. I only have a few suggestions, though none applies to the ...

    Thu Sep 02, 2021 11:21 pm

  • Poetry » General, Literature
    Re: Whatever

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I loved the rhymes you incorporated through this poem. It was very satisfying to read as well as created a good flow. You ...

    Sun Aug 29, 2021 6:26 pm

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Glass of Soda

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! In all honesty, this poem was amazing. It truly felt professionally written from the great flow you established to the beautiful story you ...

    Sat Aug 21, 2021 4:52 pm

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Satire
    Re: Automotomophobia

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! So, I was immediately drawn to this poem because I am a sucker for puppet imagery, and you did not disappoint. I loved ...

    Sat Aug 21, 2021 4:44 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Waiting

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! I loved the lonely and desolate feel of these poems. Despite incorporating beautiful imagery and colors into the flowery words, it still has ...

    Sat Aug 21, 2021 4:23 pm

  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical
    Re: To the Forest

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I love the format of this poem, and it gave me strong folktale vibes which I loved. It was entertaining to read and ...

    Fri Jul 30, 2021 10:36 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Eclipse: Chapter 1, The Awakening

    Hey there! I'm here to start at the beginning... You know me from chap 7 so let's jump right in! There was nothing to worry about as long as her ...

    Thu Jul 29, 2021 7:08 pm

  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic
    Re: Signed by A Man Confused.

    Hey there! To be honest, I just stopped by for a quick read and no review but after reading, I loved this poem and had to say something. Oooooh I ...

    Thu Jul 29, 2021 6:20 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Eclipse: Chapter 7, Nightshade

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review. Just a heads up, I have not read any of your previous chapters, so if I misunderstand anything, just ignore me, lol Let's ...

    Wed Jul 28, 2021 6:08 pm


Okay, first of all, who names their dinner? I don't want to know my dinner's name. This potato--is this potato named Steve?
— Rick Riordan, The Sword of Summer