Young Writers Society

Hey there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love the movie Good Will Hunting, and this poem does not disappoint! It is beautifully written, emotional, and ah, makes ...

Hey there! Mordax here for a review. I lovedddd this poem so decided to review it a bit differently by simply walking you through my thoughts as I read: thoughts ...

Hey there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love how much Railyn talks to himself. Incredibly relatable and provides a good balance of comic relief. We get a ...

Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I loved this poem! I loved the rhymes and it had a beautiful flow that rolled off the tongue easily. I love your ...

Hey, Mordax again to finish reviewing! they were crawling, but not like a baby crawls, like how a dog crawls, on hands and feet, not on knees. Oooh, eerie, I ...

Hey there, Mordax here for a review! Let's jump right in! I will sprinkle in suggestions, my thoughts, and what I liked throughout: The street was quiet, the sun was ...

Hey there! Mordax here with a review! I really liked this short story. It was sad, hopeless, and dark. I only have a few suggestions, though none applies to the ...

Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I loved the rhymes you incorporated through this poem. It was very satisfying to read as well as created a good flow. You ...

Hey there, Mordax here for a review! In all honesty, this poem was amazing. It truly felt professionally written from the great flow you established to the beautiful story you ...

Hey there, Mordax here for a review! So, I was immediately drawn to this poem because I am a sucker for puppet imagery, and you did not disappoint. I loved ...

Hey there, Mordax here for a review! I loved the lonely and desolate feel of these poems. Despite incorporating beautiful imagery and colors into the flowery words, it still has ...

Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I love the format of this poem, and it gave me strong folktale vibes which I loved. It was entertaining to read and ...

Hey there! I'm here to start at the beginning... You know me from chap 7 so let's jump right in! There was nothing to worry about as long as her ...

Hey there! To be honest, I just stopped by for a quick read and no review but after reading, I loved this poem and had to say something. Oooooh I ...

Hey there! Mordax here for a review. Just a heads up, I have not read any of your previous chapters, so if I misunderstand anything, just ignore me, lol Let's ...