Young Writers Society

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! i would like to open by saying while this is a very nice poem written out, i can see it as outstanding as a ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! i'd like to start by complimenting your ability to create a melancholy tone. The story of the loss of something that never quite happened ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a fascinating poem. i like how it's very stream-of-consciousness based, i feel that gave your poem a surreal unique tone that makes ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! You utilize your language in a very beautiful way in this poem. Your imagery is fantastic, it makes it very easy for your reader ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a very amusing story! It's a simple adventure, with a very fun and some what unique plot. Unfortunately, i'm not so familiar ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To begin, i'd like to start by saying i like your writing style. You use some good imagery when describing the character's emotions, but ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! i really liked the imagery and the abstract element of this piece. You painted a rather dark but fairly clear picture with your words, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is very nice! i am a huge fan of the imagery you used here, it was very unique and perfectly detailed, giving just ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! From the opening sentence, i was absorbed into this story. We learn so much about the main character from just that sentence, it's surprising. ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a nice piece. i like the idea of defeating monsters as you sleep, it's an interesting concept. You have some pretty good ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Wow! i really liked this poem! You had such incredible imagery, i could really feel the sort pain you're talking about, i get this ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, i liked this poem because it was simple and sweet, and had some good imagery sprinkled throughout. The sweet little image of lovers ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is an interesting piece. You clearly have some strong emotions, and the way you express them is attractive, although i think it could ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a nice poem. You clearly have some good ideas to express, and i must say that i completely agree with them. They ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, as i started reading this poem, i liked the two opening stanzas. The metaphors you begin to cultivate here are simple and attractive. ...