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  • Hello Jyva!! I would appreciate any reviews of my poems. I think I can take some quite harsh criticism. This is I think the best of the crop so I'd ...

    Thu May 05, 2016 6:14 pm

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: Niteowl's Review Nest

    Hello! So after a long, LONG creative hiatus I have recently started trying to write poetry again during a few sleepless nights... I have uploaded a few poems this evening ...

    Wed May 04, 2016 8:51 pm


  • Thank you so much for your help Carlito. Having mused it all over last night and then read your thoughts this morning, I think I may have a shot at ...

    Tue Jul 28, 2015 10:28 am


  • I'm writing a Fantasy novel. Well, when I say writing.... I had the idea about a year ago, and I've written perhaps 20,000 words in different drafts since then, plus ...

    Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:44 pm

  • Lounge, The
    Re: The YWS Cup II

    *reads "unsportsmanlike" comment* *feels a bit sheepish* *vaguely croaks about my dad's internet connection breaking for two hours* *feels dozens of eyes boring into me through the internet, filled wi

    Mon Feb 23, 2015 5:16 pm

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: Theo's Review Thread

    Hiya! I would love this short story to be reviewed :) I've been told to "add in setting" specifically, but anything else you think needs improving I'd love to hear!

    Mon Feb 02, 2015 9:13 pm

  • Out-of-Character Discussion
    Re: The Sims Revolution DT

    Was reading the information in the storybook and it made me feel really guilty for drowning a Sim yesterday... :/ I wanted ghost babies, ok!

    Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:13 pm

  • Serious Discussion and Debate
    Re: Oxford Style Debates

    I absolutely love this idea! We have these kinds of debates at school, except that we allow floor members to ask questions after each side has done the first two ...

    Sat Jun 28, 2014 12:04 pm


  • Thanks! Great review. Lots of really useful advice, and you didn't kill my piece like you warned! I'll definitely be requesting another review once the next chapter's up! The name ...

    Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:39 pm


  • Hi! Could you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if ...

    Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:06 pm

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: Tasty Reviews Served Here

    Hi! Would you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head!) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if ...

    Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:04 pm

  • Serious Discussion and Debate
    Re: Girls and Science

    A few things that have recently happened to me to do with the culture of discouraging girls from maths and science: In my maths class, in the run-up to the ...

    Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:14 pm

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: Giving out free reviews!

    If you'd like to review this I'd be most grateful :)

    Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:29 pm

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: Will review for soup and curry

    Hello! I'd love it if you could look at my story :) I'm afraid I don't know how to attach a picture of soup...

    Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:00 pm

  • Serious Discussion and Debate
    Re: Best Film of 2013?

    The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug. End of.

    Sun Jan 12, 2014 10:39 am


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