guineapiggirl
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Hello Jyva!! I would appreciate any reviews of my poems. I think I can take some quite harsh criticism. This is I think the best of the crop so I'd ...
Thu May 05, 2016 6:14 pm
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Hello! So after a long, LONG creative hiatus I have recently started trying to write poetry again during a few sleepless nights... I have uploaded a few poems this evening ...
Wed May 04, 2016 8:51 pm
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Thank you so much for your help Carlito. Having mused it all over last night and then read your thoughts this morning, I think I may have a shot at ...
Tue Jul 28, 2015 10:28 am
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I'm writing a Fantasy novel. Well, when I say writing.... I had the idea about a year ago, and I've written perhaps 20,000 words in different drafts since then, plus ...
Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:44 pm
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*reads "unsportsmanlike" comment* *feels a bit sheepish* *vaguely croaks about my dad's internet connection breaking for two hours* *feels dozens of eyes boring into me through the internet, filled wi
Mon Feb 23, 2015 5:16 pm
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Hiya! I would love this short story to be reviewed :) I've been told to "add in setting" specifically, but anything else you think needs improving I'd love to hear!
Mon Feb 02, 2015 9:13 pm
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Was reading the information in the storybook and it made me feel really guilty for drowning a Sim yesterday... :/ I wanted ghost babies, ok!
Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:13 pm
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I absolutely love this idea! We have these kinds of debates at school, except that we allow floor members to ask questions after each side has done the first two ...
Sat Jun 28, 2014 12:04 pm
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Thanks! Great review. Lots of really useful advice, and you didn't kill my piece like you warned! I'll definitely be requesting another review once the next chapter's up! The name ...
Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:39 pm
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Hi! Could you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if ...
Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:06 pm
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Hi! Would you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head!) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if ...
Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:04 pm
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A few things that have recently happened to me to do with the culture of discouraging girls from maths and science: In my maths class, in the run-up to the ...
Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:14 pm
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If you'd like to review this I'd be most grateful :)
Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:29 pm
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Hello! I'd love it if you could look at my story :) I'm afraid I don't know how to attach a picture of soup...
Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:00 pm
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The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug. End of.
Sun Jan 12, 2014 10:39 am