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  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: No Longer Flowing

    Hey-ho! It's Eilís here for a lil' review. To start, I loved this piece. It flows really well (despite what the title says) and I'm sure many of the authors ...

    Sun Aug 01, 2021 7:54 pm

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: July 26

    Hey there, Eilís here with a short lil' review. To start off, I really like this piece. I was unsure how I would feel about it at first, but it ...

    Wed Jul 28, 2021 8:42 pm

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: It hurts; I don't care

    This is a very strong poem with lots of raw emotion like you said. I'm unsure if you chose to do this on purpose but I like how you have ...

    Wed Jul 28, 2021 8:36 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: You’re gone

    TW Implied Suicide This was a wonderful poem. There was a lot of evoked emotion but in a somewhat subdued way. Destroyed by the stroke of a knife I like ...

    Wed Jul 28, 2021 8:33 pm

  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical
    Re: Holi Day

    Hey there Forever! It's Eilís here with a quick review for you. To start, I really love this poem you've written. It's quite simple yet you're still able to create ...

    Mon Jul 26, 2021 12:12 pm

  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: Desert Song

    Howdy waywardxwallflower (love the name!), As you have specifically asked for feedback, this will probably be a fairly long review and I'm gunna give my opinion of your piece paragraph ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2021 10:49 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: returning home but nothing has changed

    Hey chikara, I always seem to stumble upon your poems and so far I am yet to be disappointed. First things first, don't hate on your title! It might be ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2021 10:09 am

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: manifestation

    Hey there chikara, Just thought I'd give my two cents on your little piece here. the history of horror That's a really cool line. It immediately gives us some imagery ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2021 9:48 am

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: Why sad poems?

    I really like the title of this poem, as well as the poem itself. I thought the poem might be sad, but there was a very strong sense of apathy ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2021 1:22 am


  • I must say, the title definitely caught my attention and I was not expecting this piece to be what it is. Now, that in no way is a bad thing. ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2021 1:16 am

  • Poetry » Health, Realistic
    Re: Depression's hymn

    I've said it once and I'll say it again: I'm not a fan of poetry. But this... This was something else. As someone who has struggled with depression and still ...

    Sat Jul 24, 2021 11:45 pm

  • Short Story » Health, Narrative
    Re: Waking up.

    OCD and Schizophrenia are not portrayed in the media very often, nor are they often portrayed accurately. So much is explained in your piece and so much happens in it ...

    Sat Jul 24, 2021 11:38 pm

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: An Ode to Love

    I'm not usually a big fan of poetry, but this was fantastic! This was such a beautiful piece and I think that stanza 2 was my favourite. You evoke a ...

    Fri Jul 23, 2021 12:12 pm

  • Short Story » Humor, General
    Re: A Story Without Any E's

    Wow, I definitely really loved this piece. I was absolutely so surprised and pleased that you actually didn't include any e's whatsoever. That's really impressive! I loved how there was ...

    Fri Jul 23, 2021 12:06 pm

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: ​Zlog Ragesong

    I thought this was a really great piece. The plot was super engaging and I definitely fell in love with you main character. I'm unsure if you did this intentionally, ...

    Fri Jul 23, 2021 12:00 pm


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