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Hi again, really interesting chapter. I like you you are slowly connecting all the different characters you've been building up to this point. I am a bit confused as I ...

Hi. That was a very interesting start. I'm not sure whether to say Leena is a spoiled brat or feel sorry for her. The grass always seems greener on the ...

Hi again, I just couldn't wait to see what happened next. "No. It couldn’t be real. But, the silhouette. None of the other voices had one" I knew the building ...

Hi, I haven't reviewed a story this long yet so I apologise if I miss something or overexplain. This is also the first work of yours that I've read and ...

Hi, I love the passion that went into this story about basketball. First thing I wanted to mention was that I was a bit confused at first that 7th grade ...

Wow. I wish I had the courage to write something like this. I happen to be really struggling with self denial right now and am trying to practice fasting but ...

Hi, I am very interested to see how this relates to Wetfire. Perhaps that's why the Leafwing fell into the water? Either way, this story was very interesting on it's ...

Wow! This was awesome! I love how you used a real life experience like this. I've always found that your own experiences create the most passionate and enjoyable poetry. Most ...

Hi, I know this story already has a lot of reviews but I just had to talk about it since I love scenes like this so much. I won't mention ...

Yay! Another chapter of Wetfire! It felt like you rushed this one a bit and there were quite a few places that could have used more detail. Silver and Snowfall's ...

Hi, I was expecting the man to be down for the count but now we've got a whole bar fight to deal with. I love the way you described this ...

Oof! Straight through his skull? Dang, she's even stronger than I initially thought. Killing the guy wasn't that surprising I guess. He did kind of deserve it after all. (unless ...

This is a very interesting take on poetry. I have a few comments about the use of new lines and spaces in between, though I want to preface this with ...

Well, this was not what I was expecting after that prologue. Interesting concept and a futuristic feel that I really enjoyed. I love how it seemed so similar and yet ...

Great story. I really liked the message of this and it encouraged me. If you want some advice about your writing and style then this is what I have to ...