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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 1

    Hello there! @thediffident here to review your piece: I absolutely loved the plot of this story. The story seems to be light hearted, dramatic and funny. In addition to this, ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Beyblade: Rise of the dragon king!

    Hey @thediffident here to review your amazing fanfiction! One of my favourite genres in reading is action and I'm in utter awe with your piece! Your writing style is impeccable ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.1)

    Hey @thediffident here to review another part of awesome story! First of all I'm so happy to have reached the part where the characters say the title name: Shoplifting Vampires! ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.0)

    Hello! @thediffident here to review this part of your awesome story: I love DC Burke and Rev's conversations! DC Burke seems amazing and really kind-hearted and I can really see ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    Re: As the World Caves In

    Hello there! @thediffident here to review your work: I love pieces that are based on songs! Songs say so little yet at the same say so much and hold great ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.1)

    Hey there! @thediffident here to review the next part of your story: I adore the direction and the flow this story is moving with! Usually, most of the stories have ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: The adventures of Poppy Verosisca-Five

    Hey there! @thediffident here to review your interesting piece: This was so fun to read! I'm in absolute awe with your writing style. The words you use are simple and ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Stolen Magic and Potions- Chapter 1.2

    Hey @thediffident here to review the next part of your story! I was a bit confused earlier as to why you wrote 'sylvie' at the top in the first part ...

    Feb 25, 2023

  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural
    Re: The Hat Man

    Hello and welcome to the site! You're going to love it here

    Feb 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Stolen Magic and Potions- Chapter 1.1: Sunday

    Hey @thediffident here to review your piece: This was such a fun read! I absolutely loved this part and was able to relate to Sylvie on a spiritual level with ...

    Feb 25, 2023

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Other
    Re: Little Sophia

    This was so well written! The description of the characters, the room, the sound effects(which according to me was the scariest part :0 ), the toys, and the furniture really ...

    Feb 22, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Summer Vacation

    Hi there! @thediffident here to review your piece: This was such a nice poem! When I read it the first time, the poem seemed simple and sweet but the second ...

    Feb 19, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: a friend

    hello @thediffident here for a review of your poem: This poem was absolutely mesmerising! It was heartbreaking yet so beautiful. Your writing style was phenomenal and the words used here ...

    Feb 14, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.0)

    Hey @thediffident here to review your interesting piece! Firstly, I really liked the concept of how you explained the plotline of the piece via a brief interview. Your writing style ...

    Feb 12, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: A Little Care

    Hey @thediffident here to wish you a speedy recovery and to review your amazing poetry! Firstly, I absolutely loved the title you picked out for this poem- "A Little Care". ...

    Feb 10, 2023


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