Young Writers Society

Hello, ForeverYoung! I'm here for a really short review (as it is very late). I found myself reading parts of this poem slow, and parts of it fast To leave ...

Hello, MythMaster! This chapter is pretty good, although I agree with what thepages said. Another thing is you switch between calling Magnus 'Alpine' and 'Magnus'. This makes sense if other ...

Hello, MythMaster! I found this part a bit shorter than the last one, but Magnus is working on a secret project, and he's so caught up in it that he's ...

Hello, MythMaster! First of all, I think that you have a really great idea for a story, and I can't wait to see how this plays out! Here are my ...

Hello, Victoria! Welcome to YWS! Okay, this poem is short and sweet, and I especially liked how it rhymes and how you began each line with "Flowers". Since the poem ...

Hello, Pix! I have just a really short review for you today! Here are my thoughts: Okay, this poem lightly touches a sense of horror in the first part, but ...

Hi, Illy! I really enjoyed this piece. The words were woven so artistically. Here are my thoughts: Okay, the second paragraph was a bit slow, though. The sixth paragraph was ...

Hello LadyShadows! It's nice to meet you! This poem rhymes perfectly and has a wonderful flow. I think that anyone going through a hard time would find hope in reading ...

Hello, Hkumar! First of all, I like the theme of your poem. I never thought of comparing one's self with nature, the result is very agreeable! This is my favorite ...

Hello, Writing! (Can I call you that, or is there something else you prefer?) This is my favorite part: I am unfixable/I cannot do this Also, I spotted one error ...

Hello Winny! First of all, I really like this poem, it's inspiring. My only critic is that you maybe add in a little more punctuation besides the various semi-colons, commas, ...

Hello Whit! I am once again doing a short late-night review. (Maybe early morning where you are!) First of all, I'd like to say that I enjoyed this little piece, ...

Hello Illy! I just realized I hadn't reviewed today and it's getting super late, so this one's going to be short. (I hope you don't mind.) Overall, this piece is ...

Hello Horisun! I'm here to review your poem. I found this piece very relatable, I have many drafts just for me! Here are my thoughts: Sometimes I just write/To grant ...

Hello May! I'm here for another review! I found this story funny. Especially then end: And hopefully she did, but let's face it; People rarely change. Anyway, here are my ...