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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Who Do I cry for?

    Hello, ForeverYoung! I'm here for a really short review (as it is very late). I found myself reading parts of this poem slow, and parts of it fast To leave ...

    Tue Jun 22, 2021 4:09 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: S.H.A.D.O.W Chapter 1. Many Meetings (part 3/3)

    Hello, MythMaster! This chapter is pretty good, although I agree with what thepages said. Another thing is you switch between calling Magnus 'Alpine' and 'Magnus'. This makes sense if other ...

    Mon Jun 21, 2021 12:10 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: S.H.A.D.O.W Chapter 1. Many Meetings (part 2/3)

    Hello, MythMaster! I found this part a bit shorter than the last one, but Magnus is working on a secret project, and he's so caught up in it that he's ...

    Sun Jun 20, 2021 3:35 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: S.H.A.D.O.W Chapter 1. Many Meetings (part 1/3)

    Hello, MythMaster! First of all, I think that you have a really great idea for a story, and I can't wait to see how this plays out! Here are my ...

    Sat Jun 19, 2021 4:15 am

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Flowers

    Hello, Victoria! Welcome to YWS! Okay, this poem is short and sweet, and I especially liked how it rhymes and how you began each line with "Flowers". Since the poem ...

    Fri Jun 18, 2021 1:01 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: what others don't see

    Hello, Pix! I have just a really short review for you today! Here are my thoughts: Okay, this poem lightly touches a sense of horror in the first part, but ...

    Thu Jun 17, 2021 3:44 am

  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Life is strange

    Hi, Illy! I really enjoyed this piece. The words were woven so artistically. Here are my thoughts: Okay, the second paragraph was a bit slow, though. The sixth paragraph was ...

    Wed Jun 16, 2021 1:40 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Love Yourself: A Poem

    Hello LadyShadows! It's nice to meet you! This poem rhymes perfectly and has a wonderful flow. I think that anyone going through a hard time would find hope in reading ...

    Tue Jun 15, 2021 1:13 am

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Stuck in a Chrysalis

    Hello, Hkumar! First of all, I like the theme of your poem. I never thought of comparing one's self with nature, the result is very agreeable! This is my favorite ...

    Mon Jun 14, 2021 3:30 am

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Broken pieces

    Hello, Writing! (Can I call you that, or is there something else you prefer?) This is my favorite part: I am unfixable/I cannot do this Also, I spotted one error ...

    Sun Jun 13, 2021 12:20 am

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: Vision

    Hello Winny! First of all, I really like this poem, it's inspiring. My only critic is that you maybe add in a little more punctuation besides the various semi-colons, commas, ...

    Sat Jun 12, 2021 4:46 am

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: The Cafe

    Hello Whit! I am once again doing a short late-night review. (Maybe early morning where you are!) First of all, I'd like to say that I enjoyed this little piece, ...

    Fri Jun 11, 2021 3:28 am

  • Other » Realistic, General
    Re: Disappointment

    Hello Illy! I just realized I hadn't reviewed today and it's getting super late, so this one's going to be short. (I hope you don't mind.) Overall, this piece is ...

    Thu Jun 10, 2021 3:40 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: Not Posting

    Hello Horisun! I'm here to review your poem. I found this piece very relatable, I have many drafts just for me! Here are my thoughts: Sometimes I just write/To grant ...

    Tue Jun 08, 2021 11:17 pm

  • Short Story » Humor, General
    Re: Ms. Opposite

    Hello May! I'm here for another review! I found this story funny. Especially then end: And hopefully she did, but let's face it; People rarely change. Anyway, here are my ...

    Mon Jun 07, 2021 11:38 pm

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