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Hey, there! This was a smooth romantic piece, even though it started off in a really dark setting. You mentioned you are writing based on the context of a longer ...

That is a teally sad and touching story of war. Well done. I like the tone in this piece. It was grave, delivered with a sort of irony that was ...

I don’t know if you wrote this based on real-life experience or not, but if you did, I'm so sorry for you. This is a piece that should be read ...

I like this piece very much. You certainly have a lot moref potential. I Just had this one question in my mind: is this scientifically correct? I mean, the dejavu ...

Love stories always have that sublime feeling, don't they? I liked reading this story from the beginning till the end. I love the feeling of love blossoming everywhere in the ...

Hello, there Vita! This chapter was a decent read for me. I think I mentioned this before. Your narrative is always poetic, has a lot of weighty words and occasional ...

First of all, sorry for being so late to review, Vita. You must be frustrated by now. But worry not because I'm finally getting to the review. I like your ...

I'm a big fan of scholarly essays that inform about new things and that too in smooth and entertaining language. And this essay was just what I love. Well done! ...

Hi, Lia. I'm back with another review. Well, thought-provoking literary fiction to an experimental script-like piece. That's good. You're experimenting. I actually like the fact that you're using curs

This is one of the best literary fiction I've read in recent times. Very well done, indeed. There are some writings that really hit the readers from deep within. It ...

I like this short piece. You have portrayed the frustrations of Jackson pretty nicely here. Your tone of the narrative was perfect to match the anger of the protagonist. I ...

Hi, Vita. Well, I'm back to reviewing your nvel again! I like this chapter. You're doing a great job in portraying the anger and frustrations of the MC. I like ...

You really have a profoundly substantial writing style. I love it! "The sky was the color of the ocean: a deep, penetrating blue with a few clouds to act as ...

I like this story! It's got an 'Aesop's Fables' feeling to it. Here's a little suggestion: 'Unfortunately, his world of paradise didn’t last very long.' You used the word 'unfortunately' ...

I like this story very much, aeternum. You have a lot of potential indeed. I like the tone you use in the story. It was not-so-serious, kind of communicated better. ...