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  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Real

    Hey, there! This was a smooth romantic piece, even though it started off in a really dark setting. You mentioned you are writing based on the context of a longer ...

    Thu Jul 09, 2020 7:27 am

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Emerging Bodies

    That is a teally sad and touching story of war. Well done. I like the tone in this piece. It was grave, delivered with a sort of irony that was ...

    Mon Jul 06, 2020 8:25 pm

  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic
    Re: The Grievances of An African Girl Child

    I don’t know if you wrote this based on real-life experience or not, but if you did, I'm so sorry for you. This is a piece that should be read ...

    Fri Jul 03, 2020 7:31 pm

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: ​We only live -once- twice

    I like this piece very much. You certainly have a lot moref potential. I Just had this one question in my mind: is this scientifically correct? I mean, the dejavu ...

    Wed Jul 01, 2020 9:21 am

  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Milliebird

    Love stories always have that sublime feeling, don't they? I liked reading this story from the beginning till the end. I love the feeling of love blossoming everywhere in the ...

    Fri Jun 19, 2020 5:21 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction
    Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 7

    Hello, there Vita! This chapter was a decent read for me. I think I mentioned this before. Your narrative is always poetic, has a lot of weighty words and occasional ...

    Wed Jun 17, 2020 2:52 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction
    Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 6

    First of all, sorry for being so late to review, Vita. You must be frustrated by now. But worry not because I'm finally getting to the review. I like your ...

    Mon May 18, 2020 5:13 am

  • I'm a big fan of scholarly essays that inform about new things and that too in smooth and entertaining language. And this essay was just what I love. Well done! ...

    Mon May 11, 2020 6:40 am

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    Re: Locked in a Room With a Ticking Timebomb

    Hi, Lia. I'm back with another review. Well, thought-provoking literary fiction to an experimental script-like piece. That's good. You're experimenting. I actually like the fact that you're using curs

    Sun May 10, 2020 4:50 am

  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: Sleep, Whale

    This is one of the best literary fiction I've read in recent times. Very well done, indeed. There are some writings that really hit the readers from deep within. It ...

    Wed May 06, 2020 9:10 am

  • Short Story » General, Narrative
    Re: Sound of Silence

    I like this short piece. You have portrayed the frustrations of Jackson pretty nicely here. Your tone of the narrative was perfect to match the anger of the protagonist. I ...

    Wed May 06, 2020 5:38 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction
    Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 5

    Hi, Vita. Well, I'm back to reviewing your nvel again! I like this chapter. You're doing a great job in portraying the anger and frustrations of the MC. I like ...

    Tue May 05, 2020 1:38 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: At the Park

    You really have a profoundly substantial writing style. I love it! "The sky was the color of the ocean: a deep, penetrating blue with a few clouds to act as ...

    Sat May 02, 2020 8:42 am

  • Short Story » Humor, General
    Re: Barley's Coat

    I like this story! It's got an 'Aesop's Fables' feeling to it. Here's a little suggestion: 'Unfortunately, his world of paradise didn’t last very long.' You used the word 'unfortunately' ...

    Thu Apr 30, 2020 8:36 am

  • Short Story » Horror, Action / Adventure
    Re: I Kill Monsters (part 1)

    I like this story very much, aeternum. You have a lot of potential indeed. I like the tone you use in the story. It was not-so-serious, kind of communicated better. ...

    Wed Apr 29, 2020 11:24 am

Nobody wants to see the village of the happy people.
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