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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 4.4

    Woot woot, I’m finally caught up! (To the last posted chapter, at least. >.>) It looks like things are getting even more interesting here, with the time shenanigans… And ee! ...

    Sun Jan 29, 2023 4:45 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 4.3

    Aha! Looks like we finally get to see some action! Or investigation, at least, which can be just as exciting. Love the humor in this one too… xD And it ...

    Sun Jan 29, 2023 4:39 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 4.2

    Hello again, Kate! ^^ It looks like they’re getting closer to the actual mission… oooh… I also enjoyed the banter between Anna and Sally! “No silly,” said Anna, rolling her ...

    Sun Jan 29, 2023 12:33 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 4.1

    Hiya Kate!! It’s mint from the Clever Elves, here with a review this fine Review Day. =D I would definitely like to know more about the case (what was in ...

    Sun Jan 29, 2023 12:17 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 3.4

    Woot woot, last part of chapter 3! C: I’m intensely curious about the mission now, but I suppose some character interactions are fun too… Sally whirled around, already nodding so ...

    Sun Dec 18, 2022 2:42 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 3.3

    Hiya, mint here with another review! ^-^ Just one more chapter part and hopefully we get to switch to Safi again... Anyways, I'm anticipating the power overload that will surely ...

    Sun Dec 18, 2022 12:17 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 3.2

    Okay, I'm running out of things to say in this intro paragraph, so I'll just list some of my favorite parts of this chapter. xD First off-- Anna! Glad to ...

    Sat Dec 17, 2022 9:52 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 3.1

    Hello hello!! ^-^ mint here with another review from Team Chicken Heist. ;) And ooh, looks like we're getting introduced to yet another of your S-name lesbians here... xD It ...

    Sat Dec 17, 2022 8:56 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 2.3

    Hiya, mint here with another review from team Chicken Heist! =P I'm still very curious what exactly this job entails... will this group be the ones sent to investigate the ...

    Sat Dec 17, 2022 3:51 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 2.2

    Hello!! It's mint, here for another review. xD It looks like we have an additional complication here with the "malfunctioning" screen... I'm excited to see how that develops alongside Safi ...

    Sat Dec 17, 2022 2:22 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 2.1

    Hiya Harry, I'm finally here, following through on the review I promised in that first comment! xD And ooh, we get to see things from Serafina's perspective now? 0.0 Nice! ...

    Sat Dec 17, 2022 1:57 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 1.3

    Hey Harry! It's mint, here for another review! ^^ This seemed like a slower-paced chapter-- I feel like some parts could've been shortened? More on that later. But it did ...

    Sat Dec 17, 2022 1:34 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 1.2

    Hiya, Harry! ^-^ I'm here to return the favor for all the reviews you've left on my chapters .> This was a mess. She was a mess. XD A beautiful ...

    Fri Dec 16, 2022 7:18 am

  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy
    Re: LMS VI: The Pontianak

    Hiya, Wist! mint here with a review! ^^ So, continuing my chocolate analogy from the Yara-ma-yha-who review, I'd say this piece is either an unsweetened piece of 97% cacao chocolate, ...

    Fri Nov 25, 2022 1:29 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Romantic
    Re: ~Coffee Mate~ Ch.1 Gorgeous Young Man

    Hiya gem, mint here for a review, as promised!! ^-^ So first off, I absolutely love the title. Coffee Mate is a famous creamer brand, and coffee is definitely a ...

    Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:16 am


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