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Hi there, mint here with a review! ^^ So, first off: your descriptions are amazing. The way you describe the wind and the rain, as well as Aven's appearance and ...

Hiya GoodieGoat, mint here with a review! :] Overall, this poem gives me the vibes of a painting in a museum, perhaps one with soft brushstrokes depicting a rider and ...

Hi Foxmaster, mint here with a review! ^-^ This seems like a lovely spin on classic fairy tales, with Snow White's villain and Maleficent being friends and Snow White and ...

Woot woot, I’m finally caught up! (To the last posted chapter, at least. >.>) It looks like things are getting even more interesting here, with the time shenanigans… And ee! ...

Aha! Looks like we finally get to see some action! Or investigation, at least, which can be just as exciting. Love the humor in this one too… xD And it ...

Hello again, Kate! ^^ It looks like they’re getting closer to the actual mission… oooh… I also enjoyed the banter between Anna and Sally! “No silly,” said Anna, rolling her ...

Hiya Kate!! It’s mint from the Clever Elves, here with a review this fine Review Day. =D I would definitely like to know more about the case (what was in ...

Woot woot, last part of chapter 3! C: I’m intensely curious about the mission now, but I suppose some character interactions are fun too… Sally whirled around, already nodding so ...

Hiya, mint here with another review! ^-^ Just one more chapter part and hopefully we get to switch to Safi again... Anyways, I'm anticipating the power overload that will surely ...

Okay, I'm running out of things to say in this intro paragraph, so I'll just list some of my favorite parts of this chapter. xD First off-- Anna! Glad to ...

Hello hello!! ^-^ mint here with another review from Team Chicken Heist. ;) And ooh, looks like we're getting introduced to yet another of your S-name lesbians here... xD It ...

Hiya, mint here with another review from team Chicken Heist! =P I'm still very curious what exactly this job entails... will this group be the ones sent to investigate the ...

Hello!! It's mint, here for another review. xD It looks like we have an additional complication here with the "malfunctioning" screen... I'm excited to see how that develops alongside Safi ...

Hiya Harry, I'm finally here, following through on the review I promised in that first comment! xD And ooh, we get to see things from Serafina's perspective now? 0.0 Nice! ...

Hey Harry! It's mint, here for another review! ^^ This seemed like a slower-paced chapter-- I feel like some parts could've been shortened? More on that later. But it did ...