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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Broken Pieces

    Royal here for a review! It's always intimidating reviewing after Radrook, because they are always so thorough. You've chosen an interesting way to turn a common request on its head. ...

    Jul 5, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: the riptide, i.

    Royal here for a review! But it'll be a quick one, because there's so little to critique. I love the way this flows, I love the structure you chose, and ...

    May 26, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: A Train Ride

    I have been trying for weeks to write a poem about my metro rides because I find them super poetic and great opportunities to study people. And here you've done ...

    Apr 18, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: dust / waiting

    Hi! Royal here for a review. I liked this poem. I used to be in musical theater, and this brought back some memories. But let's get right to it. First, ...

    Mar 5, 2018

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: crescent, cross and star

    Hi! Royal here for a review. It'll be short and sweet because I loved this. I love this message. I love the form you chose, and the flow of each ...

    Mar 5, 2018

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Wings

    Hi! Royal here for a quick review. I love poems like this, short and sweet, to the point. My biggest pet peeve, though, is when every line is capitalized. I ...

    Mar 3, 2018

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General
    Re: The Day Eliza Elijah Woke Up

    Hi, Royal here for a quick review. First off, welcome to YWS! I see you're new here and this is your first piece. Congratulations, it's pretty good. Now it is ...

    Mar 2, 2018

  • Short Story » Romantic, Other
    Re: Last goodbye

    Hi, CrystalRose, it's Royal here for a quick review. I'll be honest, I thought this piece was not living up to its potential so I wanted to come by and ...

    Mar 1, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Tree

    It's always good to see your work, fortis! I loved this piece, I felt like I was sitting on my back porch at home, looking into the trees as the ...

    Mar 1, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: The Wrapper

    Hey! Royal here for a review. First, I'd like to say, you've done a great job of translating your emotions into poetry. I mean, I've definitely been here and this ...

    Feb 6, 2018

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Solace

    Hey there, Royal here for a quick review. This was interesting. For your first poem in a while, I think it's pretty good. Let's look at some places for improvement. ...

    Sep 2, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Jewel

    Royal here for a quick review! So, this was pretty good! Just a few things to start. Content So this girl seems kind of like a Manic Pixie Dream Girl, ...

    May 31, 2016

  • Other » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: greek girls and my willingness

    Royal here for a review! Welcome to YWS! Content So this was interesting but confusing. There are two people. In a hole. One is female, and the other is genderless, ...

    May 29, 2016

  • Poetry » Politics, Romantic
    Re: Women

    Royal here for a quick review! First, you know from my previous reviews that I am not a fan of constant capitalization. Here especially, I think conventional capitalization at the ...

    May 28, 2016

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Theatre
    Re: Meow Meow Cat Story: The story two

    Royal here for a quick review! So this has some issues, namely with consistency and conceptual cohesion. I'm not sure what's happening here, at all. I don't know what the ...

    May 28, 2016

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