Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
Re: Broken Pieces
Royal here for a review! It's always intimidating reviewing after Radrook, because they are always so thorough. You've chosen an interesting way to turn a common request on its head. ...
Poetry » Dramatic, General
Re: the riptide, i.
Royal here for a review! But it'll be a quick one, because there's so little to critique. I love the way this flows, I love the structure you chose, and ...
Poetry » General, General
Re: A Train Ride
I have been trying for weeks to write a poem about my metro rides because I find them super poetic and great opportunities to study people. And here you've done ...
Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
Re: dust / waiting
Hi! Royal here for a review. I liked this poem. I used to be in musical theater, and this brought back some memories. But let's get right to it. First, ...
Poetry » Spiritual, General
Re: crescent, cross and star
Hi! Royal here for a review. It'll be short and sweet because I loved this. I love this message. I love the form you chose, and the flow of each ...
Poetry » Narrative, General
Hi! Royal here for a quick review. I love poems like this, short and sweet, to the point. My biggest pet peeve, though, is when every line is capitalized. I ...
Short Story » Teen Fiction, General
Re: The Day Eliza Elijah Woke Up
Hi, Royal here for a quick review. First off, welcome to YWS! I see you're new here and this is your first piece. Congratulations, it's pretty good. Now it is ...
Short Story » Romantic, Other
Re: Last goodbye
Hi, CrystalRose, it's Royal here for a quick review. I'll be honest, I thought this piece was not living up to its potential so I wanted to come by and ...
Poetry » General, General
It's always good to see your work, fortis! I loved this piece, I felt like I was sitting on my back porch at home, looking into the trees as the ...
Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
Re: The Wrapper
Hey! Royal here for a review. First, I'd like to say, you've done a great job of translating your emotions into poetry. I mean, I've definitely been here and this ...
Poetry » Other, General
Hey there, Royal here for a quick review. This was interesting. For your first poem in a while, I think it's pretty good. Let's look at some places for improvement. ...
Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
Royal here for a quick review! So, this was pretty good! Just a few things to start. Content So this girl seems kind of like a Manic Pixie Dream Girl, ...
Other » Romantic, Dramatic
Re: greek girls and my willingness
Royal here for a review! Welcome to YWS! Content So this was interesting but confusing. There are two people. In a hole. One is female, and the other is genderless, ...
Poetry » Politics, Romantic
Royal here for a quick review! First, you know from my previous reviews that I am not a fan of constant capitalization. Here especially, I think conventional capitalization at the ...
Poetry » Lyrical, Theatre
Re: Meow Meow Cat Story: The story two
Royal here for a quick review! So this has some issues, namely with consistency and conceptual cohesion. I'm not sure what's happening here, at all. I don't know what the ...