Young Writers Society

Hello! I think there is something very strong at the core of this poem. It's clearest at the very end. The phrase "in hate of his weak hands falling upon ...

Hello! This was a really interesting poem. I really like the consistency of the water imagery throughout, like a river tying everything together. I also liked the consistent form that ...

Hello! I think these are some very nice haiku. I like how all of them can be pondered on for a while. The first one contrasting the oldness of the ...

Hello! I really enjoy sestinas. They're so difficult yet satisfying to write. This was a cool poem in that it felt like reading a dramatic part of a novel. Like, ...

Hello! I really enjoyed the visual of this poem, as if there are steps descending into the sea. This seems to be a poem perhaps about a painful or maybe ...

Hello! I think this poem had a really good message! You're absolutely right, tears are not a sign of weakness but a sign of emotional depth. Not to say those ...

Hello! This is a very unique poem! I like experimental stuff like this, and I think you have some really strong imagery to ground the poem in. It was a ...

Hello! This was a lovely poem. It really evoked in me a desire to be in this place, to hear little bells jingling, to feel the morning mist on my ...

Hello! Apologies for typos: I'm typing on my phone! I have a very soft spot for science-centric poetry. I tend to lean more towards biology, but I've written and read ...

Hello! Please forgive any typos, I'm typing this on my phone and don't have any spell check type deal. I've known several people with emetophobia, at least one with it ...

Hello! An interesting poem. I feel like I am still puzzling through its twists. It kind of feels cubist, in the way that there seem to be multiple copies of ...

Hello! Sorry for typos, I'm typing this on my phone. This is a cool poem and a good tribute to an ancestor. I always think poems about ancestors we've never ...

Heya empole! This was such a cool sketch of a scene, a classroom I presume, and the type of inspirational posters that just sort of melt into the background. it's ...

Hello! warning, I'm typing this on my phone so there's sure to be typos and incorrect words! This is a lovely, languid poem, heavy with rich imagery. It puts a ...

Hello! This is an interesting poem! I thought you did a very nice job giving us a narrative with high stakes, and your descriptions were at times very vivid! I ...