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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Missing you in Maine

    Hi there!! I am here with a little review, First my interpretation and stuff, This poem has a unique subject that I have rarely seen. Usually the narrator talks about ...

    Fri Sep 17, 2021 2:24 pm


  • Hi! I am Rodion and I am here to give a little review, I absolutely ADORE the three poems you've written. I have come across very few works that enable ...

    Thu Aug 12, 2021 12:26 am

  • Short Story » Satire, Teen Fiction
    Re: DonĀ“t Touch My Milk You Fiend.

    Hello there, I am Rodion and I am going to write a little review, First and foremost, I absolutely LOVE this story. It made my day, I was giggling throughout. ...

    Thu Aug 05, 2021 12:07 pm

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Depths Of the Sea

    Hello! I am here to leave a little review, This is beautiful. It's the kind of poem I would like someone to read to me in a soothing voice while ...

    Tue Jul 27, 2021 3:42 pm

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: ballad of a chair

    Hi!! Hope you are well. Here's a little review, First of all, YOUR POEM IS A CHAIR :D . I giggled a lot when I realised that, it took me ...

    Tue May 25, 2021 9:38 pm

  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: Welcome To my World

    Hi! Hope you are doing well. I am here for a little review, Even looking at your poem is satisfying, the repeated use of 'W' in the beginning of all ...

    Thu May 20, 2021 11:44 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Between the Calm and the Storm lies Limbo

    Hi!! I am here for a little review, Your poem covers almost all aspects of the scene, the present that is described. You have covered what is going on in ...

    Thu May 20, 2021 12:52 am

  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Karina and Lynette

    Hi! I am here for a review, First of all, your story is really realistic. It's like i am sitting on a branch of a nearby tree and watching as ...

    Wed May 19, 2021 1:30 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Hope amidst distress

    Hi! I am here for a little review, Your poem hits right in the heart. I too am living where there has been constant lockdown for weeks, the hospital beds ...

    Mon May 17, 2021 11:29 pm

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative
    Re: The Weight of My World In Words

    Hi! Here for a little review, This poem is beautiful. I have never read anything like it. The way you have changed the style of the stanza and the style ...

    Fri May 14, 2021 2:10 am

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: My Sister

    Hi! I am here for a little review, Good job on continuously rhyming throughout the poem, rhyming makes a poem really pleasant to read. As someone who writes poetry i ...

    Tue May 04, 2021 1:02 am

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Hi! I am here to give a little review, To begin with I absolutely Love your poem. The metaphor of Pluto and the Sun is superb. I am really impressed ...

    Mon May 03, 2021 12:51 am

  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Other
    Re: Plastic People

    Hi! Hope you are doing well. Here's a little review, You have used a wonderful metaphor - Plastic People. There are a lot of poems about society and its cruelty ...

    Fri Apr 30, 2021 4:35 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Homesick

    Hi! Hope you are well. Welcome to YWS, i am fairly new too. With the little time that i have spent here i can assure you that its going to ...

    Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:47 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Window panes and Covid-19

    Hi! Your poem is wonderful. I love the way you have written about these uncertain times in a positive way. The thing I loved most is that instead of just ...

    Sat Apr 24, 2021 10:22 pm


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