Young Writers Society

Let's just start off with the nitpicks. ^^ Suddenly everything change (changes). Or sale her body (sell) I kind of like it. The theme of it is a very teenager ...

I really like it. You really capture the entire idea of how imagination works , and how important it is. You have set the mood really well , and with ...

This is just an amazing poem. To start with , I have to say that you have really succeded to bring out a really powerfull set of emotions. I really ...

Hy! Here to review a bit. One thing I noticed that the scenery you have created is amazing. I could see myself there, by the falls. I really love how ...

Hy. I'm going to review this today. General Idea I like it. I like the message it transmits; even though I don't understand some parts , I bet that they ...

I like they way you rhymed this poem and the flow is good too. Ignoring some "oopsies" (xD) it is really good, the theme chosen being kind of , lets ...

I like it. I really do. Even though the structure is a bit odd, the scenery and emotions you've brung up are amazing. I love the way you've written it ...

Strange.. Really strange.. Guess that is why I like it. It is no ordinary poem , combining consumerism and death , which are two things I've never thought of using ...

Hy! First of all, congratulations on a good poem, but it could use some tweaking. The structure of it is good, taking things in steps , but you could have ...

I agree with idraax. The format is kind of interesting. But still , 'tis a great pair of lyrics. I like the message they send , and they would really ...

Even if it is short, it really expresses a lot. I love the way it slowly builds up tensions , and in the end “She’s not sore anymore.” . You ...

I really love the theme you've chosen. It is hard to write about life and it's ways, but you've managed quite well. Whenever I read it , I kind of ...

Hy! First, I just want to congratulate you on a very, VERY good poem. It is perfect in every way. The flow is good, the emotions are really well contured ...

Hy! I will review this poem , aparently. I like it, I really do , but I think the flow is kind of messed up due to all the full ...

Hy! I really like this poem, even though it is a wee bit abstract. The flow of it and word choice is really good. With those, you've created the scenery ...