Young Writers Society

Chapter 1 (of 4) It was cold. It was always cold in the dark. Elijah Shepherd stared sourly into a can of… kidney beans. He was fairly certain that they ...

6/10 A little crammed together.

Here's a pic of me that I took this morning. I played with it a little in photoshop just for fun.

Actually, I'm not, which is surprising, because I am a big Asimov fan. You learn new things every day.

Hey everyone. I just finished a drawing of the ship for my story 'Robot Dreams'. I did it in Google Sketchup, and I'm pretty pleased with the outcome. Just for ...

5/10 The instrumentation is cool, but the dude's voice is just irritating. Best song ever -> The intro is a little long, but well worth it. There is a second ...

8/10 Sound words to live by.

“Not much of a view, is it?” John turned away from the window. I really liked this intro. beginning a story with dialogue always shakes things up, and it really ...

Ok, first off, there were a lot of grammar mistakes, as others have pointed out. You need to read voerthis stuff more precisely. Mostly they were problems with punctuation, but ...

This was a very well written story. A few quibbles though. First off, the ravens seem very... well, very human. They're unusually smart, and understanding of human nature. I would ...

I really liked this. It's very well written, and keeps the reader interested. I can only assume from this story that we're dealing with zombies. I love zombie stories, and ...

done and done. Any more?

hmm, this one was... interesting, to say the least. It answers a few questions, but creates more then it answers. We still don't know what's going on, other then the ...

I hate to say this, and it may just me being dumb, but I have no idea what is going on. I got the first two chapters, but now I'm ...

hmm, I liked it, but there are a few things that I want to point out. First, you start the story off with "He". It seems a little awkward. try ...