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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories
    Re: The Cold Twilight

    Chapter 1 (of 4) It was cold. It was always cold in the dark. Elijah Shepherd stared sourly into a can of… kidney beans. He was fairly certain that they ...

    Wed Jun 01, 2011 4:55 pm


  • 6/10 A little crammed together.

    Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:22 am


  • Here's a pic of me that I took this morning. I played with it a little in photoshop just for fun.

    Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:28 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Ship for 'Robot Dreams'

    Actually, I'm not, which is surprising, because I am a big Asimov fan. You learn new things every day.

    Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:54 am

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Ship for 'Robot Dreams'

    Hey everyone. I just finished a drawing of the ship for my story 'Robot Dreams'. I did it in Google Sketchup, and I'm pretty pleased with the outcome. Just for ...

    Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:20 am


  • 5/10 The instrumentation is cool, but the dude's voice is just irritating. Best song ever -> The intro is a little long, but well worth it. There is a second ...

    Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:22 pm


  • 8/10 Sound words to live by.

    Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:16 pm

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories
    Re: A Flash Fiction

    “Not much of a view, is it?” John turned away from the window. I really liked this intro. beginning a story with dialogue always shakes things up, and it really ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:05 am

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Makes you think

    Ok, first off, there were a lot of grammar mistakes, as others have pointed out. You need to read voerthis stuff more precisely. Mostly they were problems with punctuation, but ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:51 am

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Sick (Critique more than welcome!)

    This was a very well written story. A few quibbles though. First off, the ravens seem very... well, very human. They're unusually smart, and understanding of human nature. I would ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:22 am

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Clan Claw

    I really liked this. It's very well written, and keeps the reader interested. I can only assume from this story that we're dealing with zombies. I love zombie stories, and ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:09 am


  • done and done. Any more?

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:53 am


  • hmm, this one was... interesting, to say the least. It answers a few questions, but creates more then it answers. We still don't know what's going on, other then the ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:52 am


  • I hate to say this, and it may just me being dumb, but I have no idea what is going on. I got the first two chapters, but now I'm ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:38 am

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: The Hawk

    hmm, I liked it, but there are a few things that I want to point out. First, you start the story off with "He". It seems a little awkward. try ...

    Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:18 am


Inspiration usually comes during work, rather than before it.
— Madeleine L'Engle, Author