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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: love is fickle - sunflower (DELETED)

    hi starlitnight with the avvie-from-the-same-movie! ;) I saw your work in the Green Room so I thought I'd pop in and give it a look though I know only a ...

    Sun Mar 22, 2020 4:59 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: The Attic

    welcome to YWS silverquill! I like your avatar! It's so pretty! Also, btw, I'm a retired mod and all but if you have questions I can always answer them ;) ...

    Sat Mar 21, 2020 3:16 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Limbo

    Okay, this was definitely an interesting poem. :) I definitely enjoyed it. The tone is definitely a little *cheeky* but also pensive and I like the way you slip between ...

    Fri Mar 20, 2020 5:07 pm

  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction
    Re: I'm F.I.N.E.

    hello pinkpuppies and welcome to YWS! your avvie is the cutest. It's my first review of the year and I'm rusty so please bear with me ;) If you're experiencing ...

    Fri Mar 20, 2020 5:11 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic
    Re: The Midwinter King, A Fairy Story-Part 1

    Ooh how interesting is that! The end of the first part just smacked me in! I have a grammar nitpick to make, and that is on dialogue punctuation! I notice ...

    Wed Dec 25, 2019 5:51 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: Earth to Paris- Prologue

    Ooh hi! Been forever since I did a review but here we are!! So one thing I see about the MC: she's suffering from trauma from the airplane accident which ...

    Sat Dec 21, 2019 3:55 pm

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: for you

    Hi Pan! It's Ink, and it's awhile since I reviewed or wrote poetry, so please take this with a grain of salt! I like your word choice a lot. I ...

    Sat Nov 02, 2019 2:57 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: When I Was Anna - 5

    AHHHH NO SUMMER DONT DO THIS AHHHH Babbling aside, I shall continue my review ;) I really like the fact that Summer is inspired by science! In many YA contemporaries ...

    Mon Aug 12, 2019 11:48 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: When I Was Anna - 4

    Ooh! So I think I just saw the inciting incident? Or anyway, we're close to it? Because I remember that talking to Micah online drove the plot in your story? ...

    Mon Aug 12, 2019 4:02 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: When I Was Anna - 3.2

    So here I am on a roll (hopefully). Maybe one tiny issue I have is that Summer seems to be...all the time...obsessed with Micah. I wouldn't mind a mini-break from ...

    Mon Aug 12, 2019 3:47 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: When I Was Anna - 3.1

    Ok ooh! So this is the first day of school. I really liked the high school atmosphere here, the lockers, everything. I enjoyed hearing the girls chatter about school classes ...

    Mon Aug 12, 2019 3:30 am

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction
    Re: August in the Desert (2)

    Okay wow that ending was kind of shocking but I'm also not surprised too?? Yep, certainly VERY unsettling story so well done with that! I'm still reeling from the end ...

    Sun Aug 04, 2019 1:59 am

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction
    Re: August in the Desert (1)

    Hello Elinor! It's been a moment since I wrote a review, so please take it with a grain of salt! So this is a super interesting story! I rarely read ...

    Sun Aug 04, 2019 1:41 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: When I Was Anna - 2

    Hii here is your resident turtle beta reader :P It was really interesting to read about May and Summer. It was such a great switch from the initial hectic band ...

    Thu Jul 04, 2019 5:17 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: When I Was Anna - 1

    Hello yes I adored this and yes I am definitely reading on

    Thu Jun 13, 2019 12:40 am


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