Young Writers Society

hi starlitnight with the avvie-from-the-same-movie! ;) I saw your work in the Green Room so I thought I'd pop in and give it a look though I know only a ...

welcome to YWS silverquill! I like your avatar! It's so pretty! Also, btw, I'm a retired mod and all but if you have questions I can always answer them ;) ...

Okay, this was definitely an interesting poem. :) I definitely enjoyed it. The tone is definitely a little *cheeky* but also pensive and I like the way you slip between ...

hello pinkpuppies and welcome to YWS! your avvie is the cutest. It's my first review of the year and I'm rusty so please bear with me ;) If you're experiencing ...

Ooh how interesting is that! The end of the first part just smacked me in! I have a grammar nitpick to make, and that is on dialogue punctuation! I notice ...

Ooh hi! Been forever since I did a review but here we are!! So one thing I see about the MC: she's suffering from trauma from the airplane accident which ...

Hi Pan! It's Ink, and it's awhile since I reviewed or wrote poetry, so please take this with a grain of salt! I like your word choice a lot. I ...

AHHHH NO SUMMER DONT DO THIS AHHHH Babbling aside, I shall continue my review ;) I really like the fact that Summer is inspired by science! In many YA contemporaries ...

Ooh! So I think I just saw the inciting incident? Or anyway, we're close to it? Because I remember that talking to Micah online drove the plot in your story? ...

So here I am on a roll (hopefully). Maybe one tiny issue I have is that Summer seems to be...all the time...obsessed with Micah. I wouldn't mind a mini-break from ...

Ok ooh! So this is the first day of school. I really liked the high school atmosphere here, the lockers, everything. I enjoyed hearing the girls chatter about school classes ...

Okay wow that ending was kind of shocking but I'm also not surprised too?? Yep, certainly VERY unsettling story so well done with that! I'm still reeling from the end ...

Hello Elinor! It's been a moment since I wrote a review, so please take it with a grain of salt! So this is a super interesting story! I rarely read ...

Hii here is your resident turtle beta reader :P It was really interesting to read about May and Summer. It was such a great switch from the initial hectic band ...

Hello yes I adored this and yes I am definitely reading on