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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature
    Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 1 (Reworked)

    Hi Mailice! I'm reviewing after 5 months, so forgive me if my skills are rusty. To start off, I have to say, I like your style of writing. It gives ...

    Mon Mar 07, 2022 1:45 pm

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: [To the shoreline]

    Hi! I'm here for a review. I think this poem portrayed two different kinds of... not exactly people, but personalities. The message I got from this poem was that though ...

    Tue Oct 12, 2021 6:23 am

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: A Note to A Butterfly

    Hi! I'm here for a review. I read this work before, but I'm reviewing it only now "^_^ I love how you portray our choices and thoughts, how we try ...

    Wed Oct 06, 2021 3:34 pm

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Lyrical
    Re: Enchantment: Written in the Stars

    Hi! I'm here for a review. I think that this work could be the start of a great novel. It seems a little too short for a short story. Don't ...

    Tue Oct 05, 2021 3:40 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Stage Fright

    Hi! I'm here to drop a quick review. Firstly, this poem was so relatable. For example, I can speak to somebody for hours on end, but if somebody makes me ...

    Sun Oct 03, 2021 4:01 pm

  • Poetry » Humor, Health
    Re: The worst biriyani in history ....

    Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review. Note: I personally am not a big fan of Biriyani, but I have friends who are. :D I loved how you expressed ...

    Sat Oct 02, 2021 9:30 am

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Satire
    Re: The Prism of Perspective

    Hi! I'm here for a quick review. First off, I really like the whole idea behind the poem. It describes a typical day in life, while giving a deeper meaning ...

    Fri Oct 01, 2021 1:53 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Perplexing Nosebleeds Of Ebonie Fantasma Chapter One:

    Hi there and welcome to YWS! Hope you like it in here. That was an interesting story. I see that it's a novel, and I'll be sure to read along ...

    Fri Oct 01, 2021 1:48 am

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Case of the Missing, um... Missing stuff

    Hi! I'm here for a quick review. The first thing I noticed was that you used those real-life 'feelings' in your story. It gives it a realistic touch, but I ...

    Fri Oct 01, 2021 1:32 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: The Mortal Machine

    Hi! I'm here for a quick review. I like the plot you've based your story on. It's set in a futuristic world (at least, I think so). The whole story ...

    Thu Sep 30, 2021 4:26 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Worth it

    Hi! I'm here for a review. First off, this poem hit hard. No, it didn't ruin my day... The ending made my day. That was really a twist since the ...

    Thu Sep 30, 2021 3:23 pm


  • Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review. To me, this poem feels somehow inspiring. Especially that last part. It seems concluding, which is ironic, since you're writing about a ...

    Thu Sep 30, 2021 2:55 pm

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: Blue

    Hi! I'm here for a review. I love this poem! Blue is probably my favourite colour, and I'm glad to see a poem written about it. The hyperbole and imagery ...

    Thu Sep 30, 2021 1:49 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

    Hi! I'm here with a short review. As you probably know (I reviewed a few of Survival: The Escape), I recently discovered your novels and totally love them. I think ...

    Thu Sep 30, 2021 12:42 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13

    Hi! I'm here for a quick review. I just started reading this novel today, and it seems really interesting. Would you mind tagging me once you post new chapters? Thanks ...

    Thu Sep 30, 2021 9:28 am


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