Young Writers Society

Ack. You can't make me pick one, so I'll go ahead and cheat and give a few. ;) The Picture of Dorian Gray, by Oscar Wilde [Dark/verges on horror] Lolita, ...

Edits/comments in red. :) There was once a girl named Ciel Courtois who was only distinguishable by the hat that she wore. In fact, I would have forgotten who she ...

Since you've made an SB of this and have decided you don't want to write it here, I'm going to lock this thread. =]

Mario Puzo is the guy who wrote The Godfather. =D And omg so many people got Nabokov. *is so jealous she could die*

So, Ty. I know you have a good grasp of flow and adjectives and all that shebang, being who you are, so I'm not going to waste either of our ...

Dude if this was a club I'd so join it. >> I'm going to take this pledge, but I don't think I'll be able to keep it very well. :S

He's snuggled next to me, alert little eyes closed as he sleeps. If he's asleep, they're not alert right now. It's not really knowledge the reader needs right now. Also, ...

Gryphon has done a decent line-by-line of this, so I'll go ahead and go for an overall review. I actually have no problem with the whole lights turning off thing, ...

The wind howled though my long, dark hair, Not fond of describing people in the first sentence. Comes off quite eager and a bit dull. stirring what I thought had ...

In the land of Elnera, everyone can learn magic - everyone. Well, except for brownie Xerin. Nothing he does seems to come out right - trying to conjure red roses? ...

Hello all! I brought snacks! Oh-kay. It's time for me to confess. I've always been scared of ants. I know, what's an anteater who's afraid of ants? I'll tell you ...

those bushes have unicorn horns? ...D: I was so unicorn-y they got affected! I'm sorry.

I wish I was pink, but I'm afraid I'm more purple than pink. I hope you don't mind and won't kick me out. :c

Many thanks to ShinDa , Lumi , and Persy for help with the revisions, and Phoenix23 for the title.

I have to say I'm intrigued by the plot, but I'm sorry to say I'm less than impressed by the writing. oo" First off, this would actually qualify as well-written ...