Young Writers Society

Hey, pineapple! It's been a while since I've reviewed anything, so I apologise in advance for how potentially ramble-ey this may turn out. The poem was short but managed to ...

AAhh bad biriyani sounds bad. Especially because when you hear biriyani, you have like a certain level of expectation that you're gonna get a tasty lunch/dinner that day. And then ...

Hey Enemy! First of all, I have to say that this is an interesting and heart-touching concept. The title is enticing, and makes you want to read the chapter. One ...

Hey Victoria! Wow! This is a nice little poem. I like how it's simple and not too deep. It's light, and an easy read. It's got a pretty smooth rhyme ...

Hey Mingan! Wow! This is deeep! It's a really interesting idea. It's sort of like a "don't judge a book by it's cover; don't judge a person by their silhouette" ...

Hey justateenagewriter! Wow! This is an interesting concept! I like how you're trying to make a more relatable human being out of the cliche rich girl trope. I like how ...

Hey I'dratherbedrawing! This is a really great poem, and I think you've expressed your feelings of brokenness in a beautiful manner. I like how you compare yourself to an unsolvable ...

Hey Andrew! First of all, let me just say, you've got an intriguing title. When I first read the title, I knew I had to read it. The theme is ...

Hey eednamoj! Wow! This is a pretty griping has a lot of drama in very little text. It's really intriguing, and after reading this I really want to read the ...

Hey PixieStix! First of all, lemme just say that this is a beautiful poem! I love the feelings that you convey about how you love this person. I like how ...

Hey Stringbean! I think you accurately explain the sentiments that you feel, about how we keep placing a lot of importance on meaningless degrees and academic awards, and struggle through ...

Hey FireEyes! This is a really great poem! I love how you include a laundry detergent in every line! It's a really innovate idea, and you've implemented the concept really ...

Hey Phillauthet! First of all, I really liked the idea of the poem, and the whole "An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind." That's a really good ...

Hey nightshadows! This was really good! The entire poem was really impactful and deep. I like how you repeat this stanza: One trip, One slip, One mistake, One shake. The ...

AHH! The last line just took the entire poem to a next level of awesomeness! I love the intensity of the lines, how powerful they are. Like when you say, ...