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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Gabriel’s special Christmas!

    Hello @vampricone6783! Here is my review: …That was before Mr.Lucas Ladouceur, William’s Dad, went on a mad murder rage and killed him and a few other people. Well that was ...

    Sun Nov 20, 2022 10:29 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter One

    All right! Book two, here we go! Here's my review: A cold dawn crept over the still sands of the south coast of Megalonia, casting golden rays of light across ...

    Thu Aug 13, 2020 7:06 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Eight

    All right! I see that this is the last chapter. Here's my review: Then a wave of cold dread washed over him like ice water. What if the Death Grippers ...

    Wed Aug 12, 2020 5:55 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Seven

    All right, now to read this chapter! Here's my review: He could hear Emerald and Shiraku behind him, but could just make out their outlines. I feel like this needs ...

    Tue Aug 11, 2020 7:32 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Six

    All right, now to learn about what happened after your cliffhanger! Here's my review: He could hear the Wisp Talons angry roars echoing through the forest a few meters behind ...

    Mon Aug 10, 2020 5:01 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Five

    All right, now to continue on this wonderful novel of yours! Here's my review: Were there other dragon tribes? Did they fight for land as they did in Megalonia? Maybe ...

    Mon Aug 10, 2020 1:00 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Four

    Hello! I'm here back for another review. And here it is: Yawning, he got to his feet, stretching from his head to the tip of his tail. This is being ...

    Sat Aug 08, 2020 7:42 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Three

    Hello! I'm back to read this next chapter. I'm doing it a little bit different than I normally do. Normally I read the chapter and THEN write the review, but ...

    Fri Aug 07, 2020 9:18 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Two

    Well, here's another chapter, with Zoltar and company back together. Anyway, here's my review: Okay so this was another great chapter, though it lacked a lot of the wonderful descriptions ...

    Thu Aug 06, 2020 8:01 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty One

    Hello! Here I am, back for another review. Here's my review: Okay, so I liked Zoltar's thought patterns in this. Actually, that's basically what this chapter was about - Zoltar ...

    Wed Aug 05, 2020 8:31 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty

    Well, another interesting chapter! And I FINALLY get to see what was going on with the wisp talons. Anyway, here's my review: I like how you started the chapter with ...

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 2:08 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nineteen

    Wooh! Cliffhangers! I love 'em. Anyway here's my review: This was an interesting chapter, as we get to see some more of Zoltar's thoughts as he's in quite the pickle. ...

    Mon Aug 03, 2020 4:11 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eighteen

    Well, another great chapter! This one was quite short. I liked it though. The whole chapter was quite sit-on-the-edge-of-your-seat intense, and it was very effective to keep me interested. I ...

    Sun Aug 02, 2020 4:07 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seventeen

    All righty! I haven't done any reviews in WAY too long, so here goes nothing. Okay so I started reading this trying to remember what was happening, but I remembered ...

    Sat Aug 01, 2020 4:00 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Sixteen

    This reminded me of warriors A LOT with the whole hunting thing. Here's my review: Though the plot doesn't develop much, you get to see another side of Zoltar, with ...

    Fri May 15, 2020 8:31 pm


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— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender