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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 22

    I picked this story up near the end, so there's still a lot of details that aren't totally clear to me, but I feel like I have a good handle ...

    Mar 6, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 21

    What decision did Issac make!? I don't really mean that as a matter of suspense. I just don't think leaving that on an ambiguous note really works here. Even if ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 20

    I feel like Alice! Definitely some strange stuff going on. Just to reiterate what I said earlier, I like how you're switching back and forth between beats in the action. ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 19

    Hey! Finished chapters 17 and 18, and now reading chapter 19. I like how we're returning to Shadowscale after the Alice / Issac chapter, but it is a bit jarring ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 18

    Hey Necromancer! I just finished Chapter 17, and I'm going to try to make my through the remaining chapters. So first, I really like how this opens. The last chapter ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 17

    Hey Necromancer! Like @LadySpark, I'm jumping into this in the middle, but I like what I'm reading. If I'm reading it correctly, this is set in a universe where dragons ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. This is a silly poem. ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    An animation can contain several layers and so its size can be important. This is annoying for a Web page. The Optimize filters let you reduce this size. Many elements ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Oh Gray Threads!

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    What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

    Mar 31, 2018


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