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  • I haven't seen the old Battlestar, but the 'new' seasons look great so far. I love how all their papers and boards are octagonal and the name of their planets.

    Tue May 27, 2008 8:34 pm

  • Hello! Nice going so far. Myth

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 1:05 pm

  • Science-Fiction Novels
    Re: [01] the otherplace tear

    Sophie cast him a withering glare in reply […] They are almost the same thing, so maybe just use one of them? "I saw the tear, but never dwelt on ...

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:22 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Aspects of the Backyard

    1 — The shadow is very distracting, it looks as if your fingers got in the way when you took took the picture. I'd suggest darkening and perhaps blurring the ...

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:57 am

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: The Process.

    Hello! To be honest I thought this was going to be something about suicide and almost didn’t continue reading, but I liked the way it turned out they weren’t actually ...

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:46 am

  • Art & Photography
    Re: The Matrix

    I like it. Two things to point out: Trinity's lips look odd and it seems you cut Neo out of another picture since his right side doesn't blend with Morpheus's ...

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:37 am

  • Hello! I think this is too short. The reader doesn't get a feel of the atmosphere or connect with any of the characters--you have twenty to work on and the ...

    Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:56 pm

  • Novel Workshop
    Re: [deleted]

    Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Ch. 1 It sounded like another little rebellion [s]began[/s] had begun , this time in the kitchen. ^^^ See quote ...

    Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:34 pm

  • Hello Kadie! Sometimes it's your cover letter that counts, people will decide to look at--or skim--your CV if the cover letter is good enough. Good luck job hunting, I only ...

    Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:10 pm

  • I wouldn't call Harry Potter a trilogy. So did you get your dog on Christmas? =] And what are the awards for: prose, poetry?

    Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:55 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Statue: Six Photographs

    Numkbers one to four are my favourite, the others didn't really draw my interest. For number three you could crop to get rid of the building, or go back there ...

    Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:47 pm

  • Writing Activities
    Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    A straw hat that's just the right size. ~Aethel .: What makes your head[s] spin?

    Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:43 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: sensationalization

    I love numbers four and five, they make me feel sleepy and remind of our local library, number four looks really great in black and white.

    Fri Jan 25, 2008 4:10 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: A fish

    Compared to those green pebbles that fish is tiny! And very pretty pretty colours. I'd suggest cropping it so you don't really see anything outside the bowl.

    Fri Jan 25, 2008 3:58 pm

  • Really shocking. He always looked so cheeky.

    Wed Jan 23, 2008 2:43 pm

But if he hadn't said that, Bear Thompson wouldn't have been himself.
— CaptainJack