Young Writers Society

Hello, this is a review. I love reading poems about fairy tale characters! Riding Hood is a great character to explore the theme of revenge with. I noticed that the ...

Hello! This is a review. I really liked the line. "But never could I envision, like on tape, this collision." The flow of the vowels and the crack of consonants ...

Hello, this is a review. Love seeing another water chart! My favorite part was the asterisk at the end. "well-hidden under the waves of your jet-black hair, where words can ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. I deeply empathize with the sentiment behind this poem. And I have good news! Anyone can be a boy, or call themselves a boyfriend, ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. The use of the graph for this poem adds an interesting level to reading. Though, I appreciate that the text is also available in ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. This was a dense piece so I made sure to read it aloud a few times. I liked this line. "yet there is no ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. Firstly, I love Alice in Wonderland so this was a fun read. I liked the alliteration of "Wish with it wisely" at the end. ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. Firstly, I was not aware there were pink swiss rolls! I had to look it up haha. Secondly, I think my favorite line is ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. First of all, (“I am… the Secondary Protagonist,” said the voice profoundly.) This was hilarious. The repetition of the radio waking up either spouse, ...

Hello, I'm leaving a review. First of all, this was a heartwarming story that certainly put me in a cozy holiday mood. Even with not having read the rest of ...

Hello, I am leaving a review. First of all, this was a lovely poem to read right now. The sentiment of togetherness is never overdone and I'm thankful you took ...

Hello, I'm leaving a review. Some lines that stood out to me are: "I see that the sink broke, I better call the plumbers" This line made me laugh. I ...

Hello, I'm leaving a review. I'd like to share what parts really stood out to me and why. "my new place is brand new but somehow still haunted the ghosts ...

This is lovely! Your turn of phrase is vibrant and imaginative. I think it might be interesting if you play with the order of your words a bit more. For ...

Interesting! I got goosebumps. The writing is quite fluid and I really enjoyed your use of flashback. I did get a little confused when you transitioned from the dream to ...