Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic
Re: Little Silver Sword
Hello, this is a review. I love reading poems about fairy tale characters! Riding Hood is a great character to explore the theme of revenge with. I noticed that the ...
Poetry » Romantic, Literature
Re: Glimpse of love
Hello! This is a review. I really liked the line. "But never could I envision, like on tape, this collision." The flow of the vowels and the crack of consonants ...
Poetry » Science, General
Re: Water Poems: Flowchart
Hello, this is a review. Love seeing another water chart! My favorite part was the asterisk at the end. "well-hidden under the waves of your jet-black hair, where words can ...
Poetry » Other, General
Re: female boyfriend
Hello, I am leaving a review. I deeply empathize with the sentiment behind this poem. And I have good news! Anyone can be a boy, or call themselves a boyfriend, ...
Poetry » General, General
Re: Water Poems: Reflections
Hello, I am leaving a review. The use of the graph for this poem adds an interesting level to reading. Though, I appreciate that the text is also available in ...
Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
Hello, I am leaving a review. This was a dense piece so I made sure to read it aloud a few times. I liked this line. "yet there is no ...
Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical
Hello, I am leaving a review. Firstly, I love Alice in Wonderland so this was a fun read. I liked the alliteration of "Wish with it wisely" at the end. ...
Poetry » Fantasy, General
Re: Admission of the Whimsical
Hello, I am leaving a review. Firstly, I was not aware there were pink swiss rolls! I had to look it up haha. Secondly, I think my favorite line is ...
Art » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
Re: Strangely Non-Sequitur
Hello, I am leaving a review. First of all, (“I am… the Secondary Protagonist,” said the voice profoundly.) This was hilarious. The repetition of the radio waking up either spouse, ...
Short Story » General, General
Re: Christmas Cheer - A Random Short Story Featuring Characters from My Own WIP
Hello, I'm leaving a review. First of all, this was a heartwarming story that certainly put me in a cozy holiday mood. Even with not having read the rest of ...
Poetry » Health, Realistic
Re: I Will Always Stand by You
Hello, I am leaving a review. First of all, this was a lovely poem to read right now. The sentiment of togetherness is never overdone and I'm thankful you took ...
Art » General, Literature
Re: The Corn Grows Towards The Sky
Hello, I'm leaving a review. Some lines that stood out to me are: "I see that the sink broke, I better call the plumbers" This line made me laugh. I ...
Poetry » Romantic, General
Re: Exit 17
Hello, I'm leaving a review. I'd like to share what parts really stood out to me and why. "my new place is brand new but somehow still haunted the ghosts ...
Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
Re: falling at wonderful heights
This is lovely! Your turn of phrase is vibrant and imaginative. I think it might be interesting if you play with the order of your words a bit more. For ...
Short Story » General, General
Interesting! I got goosebumps. The writing is quite fluid and I really enjoyed your use of flashback. I did get a little confused when you transitioned from the dream to ...