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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic
    Re: Little Silver Sword

    Hello, this is a review. I love reading poems about fairy tale characters! Riding Hood is a great character to explore the theme of revenge with. I noticed that the ...

    Tue Feb 15, 2022 5:30 pm

  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature
    Re: Glimpse of love

    Hello! This is a review. I really liked the line. "But never could I envision, like on tape, this collision." The flow of the vowels and the crack of consonants ...

    Tue Feb 15, 2022 4:36 pm

  • Poetry » Science, General
    Re: Water Poems: Flowchart

    Hello, this is a review. Love seeing another water chart! My favorite part was the asterisk at the end. "well-hidden under the waves of your jet-black hair, where words can ...

    Mon Dec 20, 2021 6:21 pm

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: female boyfriend

    Hello, I am leaving a review. I deeply empathize with the sentiment behind this poem. And I have good news! Anyone can be a boy, or call themselves a boyfriend, ...

    Mon Dec 20, 2021 4:20 pm

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Water Poems: Reflections

    Hello, I am leaving a review. The use of the graph for this poem adds an interesting level to reading. Though, I appreciate that the text is also available in ...

    Tue Dec 14, 2021 4:47 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Sellout

    Hello, I am leaving a review. This was a dense piece so I made sure to read it aloud a few times. I liked this line. "yet there is no ...

    Mon Dec 06, 2021 7:24 pm

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical
    Re: Wonderland

    Hello, I am leaving a review. Firstly, I love Alice in Wonderland so this was a fun read. I liked the alliteration of "Wish with it wisely" at the end. ...

    Tue Nov 23, 2021 4:56 pm

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: Admission of the Whimsical

    Hello, I am leaving a review. Firstly, I was not aware there were pink swiss rolls! I had to look it up haha. Secondly, I think my favorite line is ...

    Tue Nov 23, 2021 4:47 pm

  • Art » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Strangely Non-Sequitur

    Hello, I am leaving a review. First of all, (“I am… the Secondary Protagonist,” said the voice profoundly.) This was hilarious. The repetition of the radio waking up either spouse, ...

    Mon Nov 22, 2021 9:16 pm


  • Hello, I'm leaving a review. First of all, this was a heartwarming story that certainly put me in a cozy holiday mood. Even with not having read the rest of ...

    Mon Nov 22, 2021 8:50 pm

  • Poetry » Health, Realistic
    Re: I Will Always Stand by You

    Hello, I am leaving a review. First of all, this was a lovely poem to read right now. The sentiment of togetherness is never overdone and I'm thankful you took ...

    Mon Nov 22, 2021 5:01 pm

  • Art » General, Literature
    Re: The Corn Grows Towards The Sky

    Hello, I'm leaving a review. Some lines that stood out to me are: "I see that the sink broke, I better call the plumbers" This line made me laugh. I ...

    Thu Nov 18, 2021 6:53 pm

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Exit 17

    Hello, I'm leaving a review. I'd like to share what parts really stood out to me and why. "my new place is brand new but somehow still haunted the ghosts ...

    Thu Nov 18, 2021 5:49 pm

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: falling at wonderful heights

    This is lovely! Your turn of phrase is vibrant and imaginative. I think it might be interesting if you play with the order of your words a bit more. For ...

    Tue Nov 01, 2016 1:40 am

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Elora

    Interesting! I got goosebumps. The writing is quite fluid and I really enjoyed your use of flashback. I did get a little confused when you transitioned from the dream to ...

    Tue Nov 01, 2016 1:24 am


When people are free to do as they please, they usually imitate each other.
— Eric Hoffer