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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: [To a Main Character]

    Hey, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! People crush sunflowers too large to fit in a jean pocket. Nice imagery in this opening! It's no hidden subtext, I ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 2:50 am

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: SHE

    Hey, Nightk! Here's a review for you today! I’m in a battle and i need to win, i have to win, my inner me doesn't want to lose but a ...

    Mon Jun 28, 2021 2:03 am

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Maybe

    Hey, Phillauthet! Here's a review for you today! Then why can't we hear them? Maybe we've just Shut our Ears. But why can't we understand them? Maybe we've just Stopped ...

    Sat Jun 26, 2021 4:03 pm

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: The Colour Red

    Hey, AlmostImmortal! Here's a review for you today and welcome to YWS! Red is the colour who cannot decide It fights for love, longs for hate I love the personification ...

    Fri Jun 25, 2021 4:03 am

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: first love (part one)

    Hey, Froggy! Here's a review for you today! This is a little different because I decided to give you a full edit. I like the direction that this story is ...

    Thu Jun 24, 2021 3:34 am

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Trace Finds Help

    Hey, ArctiWolf! Here's a review for you today! Trace, a now-retired fire ant major, was making good time. Though it made him sad that all the locals were afraid of ...

    Wed Jun 23, 2021 1:59 am

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Peachy's Adventures Chapter 1

    Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought this was a pretty funny concept for a story about two birds in a pet store. I love how Kirbie ...

    Mon Jun 21, 2021 1:56 pm

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: Winter

    Hi, Mingan! Here's a short review for you today! When the air starts to bite, And my feet get a chill, I know it’s that time of year, My soul ...

    Sun Jun 20, 2021 1:56 pm

  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Behind The Window

    Hey, Wordzyy! Here's a short review for you today! She dwells all night long gaining the ground of my breath. Toiling slowly with (the) shovel she brings with her(.) I ...

    Sat Jun 19, 2021 4:19 am

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: When the Wind Blows 1.2

    Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought that these first two parts to chapter one were very well written and I'm loving the story so far! This ...

    Fri Jun 18, 2021 4:13 am

  • Short Story » Humor, Humor
    Re: potato shirt

    Hi, apple the writer! Here's a short review for you today! Potato got in his potato car and raced over there, but it was crowded. Aw, don't you hate it ...

    Thu Jun 17, 2021 3:16 am

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: it feels like we only go backwards

    Hi, chikara! Here's a short review for you today! you said you'd choke me if I didn't try and you said you'd watch as every soul leaves my body. I ...

    Wed Jun 16, 2021 4:22 am

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: Floodgates with missing keys

    Hi, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! my mother shouts me out the numbers The wording of this line felt a little strange to me. What if you ...

    Tue Jun 15, 2021 3:55 am

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: nature is art

    Hi illy7896! Here's a short review for you today! the spider’s web that crawls is never honest. Ants climb their mountains- a treacherous journey, I really liked the imagery of ...

    Mon Jun 14, 2021 4:00 am

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Midnight ponderings

    Hi, NivedaJames22! Here's a short review for you today! Gentle murmurs Of soft slumber, Whispered words Of the half-asleep. Turbulent changes Like a chaotic sea, Between dream to dream, With ...

    Sat Jun 12, 2021 5:04 pm


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