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Hey, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! People crush sunflowers too large to fit in a jean pocket. Nice imagery in this opening! It's no hidden subtext, I ...
Wed Jun 30, 2021 2:50 am
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Hey, Nightk! Here's a review for you today! I’m in a battle and i need to win, i have to win, my inner me doesn't want to lose but a ...
Mon Jun 28, 2021 2:03 am
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Hey, Phillauthet! Here's a review for you today! Then why can't we hear them? Maybe we've just Shut our Ears. But why can't we understand them? Maybe we've just Stopped ...
Sat Jun 26, 2021 4:03 pm
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Hey, AlmostImmortal! Here's a review for you today and welcome to YWS! Red is the colour who cannot decide It fights for love, longs for hate I love the personification ...
Fri Jun 25, 2021 4:03 am
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Hey, Froggy! Here's a review for you today! This is a little different because I decided to give you a full edit. I like the direction that this story is ...
Thu Jun 24, 2021 3:34 am
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Hey, ArctiWolf! Here's a review for you today! Trace, a now-retired fire ant major, was making good time. Though it made him sad that all the locals were afraid of ...
Wed Jun 23, 2021 1:59 am
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Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought this was a pretty funny concept for a story about two birds in a pet store. I love how Kirbie ...
Mon Jun 21, 2021 1:56 pm
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Hi, Mingan! Here's a short review for you today! When the air starts to bite, And my feet get a chill, I know it’s that time of year, My soul ...
Sun Jun 20, 2021 1:56 pm
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Hey, Wordzyy! Here's a short review for you today! She dwells all night long gaining the ground of my breath. Toiling slowly with (the) shovel she brings with her(.) I ...
Sat Jun 19, 2021 4:19 am
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Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought that these first two parts to chapter one were very well written and I'm loving the story so far! This ...
Fri Jun 18, 2021 4:13 am
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Hi, apple the writer! Here's a short review for you today! Potato got in his potato car and raced over there, but it was crowded. Aw, don't you hate it ...
Thu Jun 17, 2021 3:16 am
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Hi, chikara! Here's a short review for you today! you said you'd choke me if I didn't try and you said you'd watch as every soul leaves my body. I ...
Wed Jun 16, 2021 4:22 am
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Hi, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! my mother shouts me out the numbers The wording of this line felt a little strange to me. What if you ...
Tue Jun 15, 2021 3:55 am
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Hi illy7896! Here's a short review for you today! the spider’s web that crawls is never honest. Ants climb their mountains- a treacherous journey, I really liked the imagery of ...
Mon Jun 14, 2021 4:00 am
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Hi, NivedaJames22! Here's a short review for you today! Gentle murmurs Of soft slumber, Whispered words Of the half-asleep. Turbulent changes Like a chaotic sea, Between dream to dream, With ...
Sat Jun 12, 2021 5:04 pm
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