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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: [To a Main Character]

    Hey, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! People crush sunflowers too large to fit in a jean pocket. Nice imagery in this opening! It's no hidden subtext, I ...

    Jun 29, 2021

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: SHE

    Hey, Nightk! Here's a review for you today! I’m in a battle and i need to win, i have to win, my inner me doesn't want to lose but a ...

    Jun 27, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Maybe

    Hey, Phillauthet! Here's a review for you today! Then why can't we hear them? Maybe we've just Shut our Ears. But why can't we understand them? Maybe we've just Stopped ...

    Jun 26, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: The Colour Red

    Hey, AlmostImmortal! Here's a review for you today and welcome to YWS! Red is the colour who cannot decide It fights for love, longs for hate I love the personification ...

    Jun 25, 2021

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: first love (part one)

    Hey, Froggy! Here's a review for you today! This is a little different because I decided to give you a full edit. I like the direction that this story is ...

    Jun 23, 2021

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Trace Finds Help

    Hey, ArctiWolf! Here's a review for you today! Trace, a now-retired fire ant major, was making good time. Though it made him sad that all the locals were afraid of ...

    Jun 22, 2021

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Peachy's Adventures Chapter 1

    Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought this was a pretty funny concept for a story about two birds in a pet store. I love how Kirbie ...

    Jun 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: Winter

    Hi, Mingan! Here's a short review for you today! When the air starts to bite, And my feet get a chill, I know it’s that time of year, My soul ...

    Jun 20, 2021

  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Behind The Window

    Hey, Wordzyy! Here's a short review for you today! She dwells all night long gaining the ground of my breath. Toiling slowly with (the) shovel she brings with her(.) I ...

    Jun 19, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: When the Wind Blows 1.2

    Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought that these first two parts to chapter one were very well written and I'm loving the story so far! This ...

    Jun 18, 2021

  • Short Story » Humor, Humor
    Re: potato shirt

    Hi, apple the writer! Here's a short review for you today! Potato got in his potato car and raced over there, but it was crowded. Aw, don't you hate it ...

    Jun 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: it feels like we only go backwards

    Hi, chikara! Here's a short review for you today! you said you'd choke me if I didn't try and you said you'd watch as every soul leaves my body. I ...

    Jun 16, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: Floodgates with missing keys

    Hi, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! my mother shouts me out the numbers The wording of this line felt a little strange to me. What if you ...

    Jun 14, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: nature is art

    Hi illy7896! Here's a short review for you today! the spider’s web that crawls is never honest. Ants climb their mountains- a treacherous journey, I really liked the imagery of ...

    Jun 14, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Midnight ponderings

    Hi, NivedaJames22! Here's a short review for you today! Gentle murmurs Of soft slumber, Whispered words Of the half-asleep. Turbulent changes Like a chaotic sea, Between dream to dream, With ...

    Jun 12, 2021


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