Young Writers Society

Hello, Zan! Because you reviewed my story, which, by the way, I want to thank you for, I wanted to review your story as well. So, here you go! :) ...

Hello again! I noticed there were 20 unreviewed stories, (Holy smoke. o_o), so I decided to review yours first! Again, I love your story, and I can't wait to read ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay! Anyway, onto the review. Your story is interesting so far, but my only compliant if you spaced out some of the ...

Hello! Here's the review you wanted! :) I liked how you told a story in a poem. I also loved how you described Joanna and the main character. I also ...

Your story is nice, but it would be nice if you spaced out alot of things. (Description, New paragraph, Dialogue, ect.) A block a text is very hard read, and ...

It would be nice if you extended the length of the story more. Still, I'll do my best to review it. You have an interesting story, but there are a ...

You're story is interesting by far, but it's kind of short for the first chapter. Plus, it almost sounds a bit too familiar with the Percy Jackson series. (The modern ...