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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: The Trouble With Titanium-- Ch. 2

    Hello, Zan! Because you reviewed my story, which, by the way, I want to thank you for, I wanted to review your story as well. So, here you go! :) ...

    Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:25 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Blue Prints Chapter Two

    Hello again! I noticed there were 20 unreviewed stories, (Holy smoke. o_o), so I decided to review yours first! Again, I love your story, and I can't wait to read ...

    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:59 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Blue Prints Chapter One

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay! Anyway, onto the review. Your story is interesting so far, but my only compliant if you spaced out some of the ...

    Tue Jul 06, 2010 8:38 pm

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Joanna

    Hello! Here's the review you wanted! :) I liked how you told a story in a poem. I also loved how you described Joanna and the main character. I also ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:54 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Chapter One-No name yet

    Your story is nice, but it would be nice if you spaced out alot of things. (Description, New paragraph, Dialogue, ect.) A block a text is very hard read, and ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:28 pm

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: desire?

    It would be nice if you extended the length of the story more. Still, I'll do my best to review it. You have an interesting story, but there are a ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:18 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: I'm a Teenage Demigod: CHAPTER 1

    You're story is interesting by far, but it's kind of short for the first chapter. Plus, it almost sounds a bit too familiar with the Percy Jackson series. (The modern ...

    Tue Jun 29, 2010 4:01 pm


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