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  • Hello. Can you review this? If you want, I can link the earlier chapters.

    Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:06 am

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: The Chaos (Chapter four)

    Dear God, how long was I gone? >_> Well, after a long wait, here's chapter four of my novel series, The Chaos. Enjoy, everybody. :) Chapter four Time to leave ...

    Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:58 pm


  • You know you're a writer when You act out your characters (Don't look at me like that! D:) You go to your computer to write....first thing in the morning

    Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:19 am

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: The Trouble With Titanium-- Ch. 2

    Hello, Zan! Because you reviewed my story, which, by the way, I want to thank you for, I wanted to review your story as well. So, here you go! :) ...

    Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:25 pm

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Blue Prints Chapter Two

    Hello again! I noticed there were 20 unreviewed stories, (Holy smoke. o_o), so I decided to review yours first! Again, I love your story, and I can't wait to read ...

    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:59 pm


  • Hello... It's me again. *smiles nervously* I am terribly sorry if I am being a bother, but can you review this? Again, I am so sorry if I am a ...

    Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:28 pm

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: The Chaos (Chapter three)

    Here's chapter three of my novel. I hope you all enjoy. Note: Abeiuwa is a Nigerian name which means "Born in a good time" in case you get confused. Chapter ...

    Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:17 pm

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Blue Prints Chapter One

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay! Anyway, onto the review. Your story is interesting so far, but my only compliant if you spaced out some of the ...

    Tue Jul 06, 2010 8:38 pm


  • Thank you so much!

    Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:37 pm


  • Thank you so much for reviewing my first chapter! Now, I'm sorry if this is asking too much, but can you review chapter two?

    Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:35 pm

  • Fanfiction Novels
    Re: New Harry Potter book

    You have this in the wrong section.This belongs to the fanfiction section.

    Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:06 am

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Black and Blue ch.2

    Not to sound rude, but it would be easier if you spaced everything out. Clunk text makes it hard to read, and the reader will get confused.

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:53 pm


  • Um...*looks around nevrously.* When you have the time, can you review this? The Chaos (Chapter one)-

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:44 pm

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Joanna

    Hello! Here's the review you wanted! :) I liked how you told a story in a poem. I also loved how you described Joanna and the main character. I also ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:54 pm

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Chapter One-No name yet

    Your story is nice, but it would be nice if you spaced out alot of things. (Description, New paragraph, Dialogue, ect.) A block a text is very hard read, and ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:28 pm


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