Young Writers Society

Hello. Can you review this? If you want, I can link the earlier chapters.

Dear God, how long was I gone? >_> Well, after a long wait, here's chapter four of my novel series, The Chaos. Enjoy, everybody. :) Chapter four Time to leave ...

You know you're a writer when You act out your characters (Don't look at me like that! D:) You go to your computer to write....first thing in the morning

Hello, Zan! Because you reviewed my story, which, by the way, I want to thank you for, I wanted to review your story as well. So, here you go! :) ...

Hello again! I noticed there were 20 unreviewed stories, (Holy smoke. o_o), so I decided to review yours first! Again, I love your story, and I can't wait to read ...

Hello... It's me again. *smiles nervously* I am terribly sorry if I am being a bother, but can you review this? Again, I am so sorry if I am a ...

Here's chapter three of my novel. I hope you all enjoy. Note: Abeiuwa is a Nigerian name which means "Born in a good time" in case you get confused. Chapter ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay! Anyway, onto the review. Your story is interesting so far, but my only compliant if you spaced out some of the ...

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much for reviewing my first chapter! Now, I'm sorry if this is asking too much, but can you review chapter two?

You have this in the wrong section.This belongs to the fanfiction section.

Not to sound rude, but it would be easier if you spaced everything out. Clunk text makes it hard to read, and the reader will get confused.

Um...*looks around nevrously.* When you have the time, can you review this? The Chaos (Chapter one)-

Hello! Here's the review you wanted! :) I liked how you told a story in a poem. I also loved how you described Joanna and the main character. I also ...

Your story is nice, but it would be nice if you spaced out alot of things. (Description, New paragraph, Dialogue, ect.) A block a text is very hard read, and ...