Young Writers Society

Ooh, a sly tale! So, so, we've got this...sly character with their brown wool coat at the tavern. The beginning starts off with this character in one of the lighted ...

Hello! Prepare for a review! To begin with, let's start out with the title! It's a nicely selected one, it considers the poem's subject--obviously a goldfish for a subject as ...

Hey, at least you made use of your time during the test xD Anyways, onwards to the review! This definitely humored me, being that I have this feeling, too. The ...

I like how you take a cruel topic such as this one and turn it into a decent poem all the while. I left reading this poem with the impression....of ...

When I was reading this, each word felt powerful but coming from somewhere deep. The notion you provide the readers with is well-developed and supported, building up until the poem's ...

Ooookay, I see how this particular poem was listed under dramatic XD Moving on, the subject of the poem was very unclear. First of all, the title was misleading. You ...

I read this poem feeling, as sunshine said, powerful. You supported your poem with an effective message, all the while sticking to the subject and title of the poem. Your ...

Wow, my first impression of the poem was almost suspenseful. It had an overall mystery surrounding it and in the end, especially that concluding line, I felt satisfied with this ...

This was an entertaining short story with both a tone and writing style that I now commend. Though at first I was uncertain of what the story was going to ...

Though I have read many stories, both short and long, revolving around a dare, this was a different take from the rest. You don't necessarily focus on the external conflict ...

This was actually an amazing song. I really felt for the speaker of the song and the particular memories that she buried up from four years ago were fitting. The ...

You chose a very deep topic to dive into and it's promising. I enjoyed it, however, like all literary works, there's always room for improvement. Hopefully, you'll consider the following ...

This was one of the few poems that not only appealing, it was riveting my inner thoughts. You don't use a formal tone either, which is the better choice in ...

Very intriguing notions you have in this poem. It's novelty from what I've read thus far as well. Melody is a song I played only once. Maybe, if you wish, ...

I like your formatting! It seems both fitting and somewhat better this way. I really like this poem. You were undeviating throughout the poem and focused on the general themes ...