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  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: Weight

    Hi! Sorry for being late! Here's the review as requested. :D She wrapped the coat tighter around her body in an effort to seek some of the warmth it was ...

    Fri Sep 24, 2021 2:57 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Faint Etches 1.1

    Hi, I'm here to review! It's been a while since I review, so the quality might plummet. ^^' The story is interesting from the starting. You've laid out a neat ...

    Mon Sep 02, 2019 3:30 pm

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Journey of My Heart

    Hi! It's me giving a quick review for this poem. :D I see no stanzas in this poem, so I suspect you have an issue with the formatting. It's pretty ...

    Fri Mar 22, 2019 5:39 pm

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Violet

    Hi! I'm here to leave a short review. :D 1st stanza: So the first line is good. Sufficiently interesting, if I may say so myself. The action and description is ...

    Sun Jan 13, 2019 7:51 am

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science
    Re: We yearned

    Hey! It's been a while since I reviewed your stuff, so let's get into this. :D Everything I've said is meant for improvement, so please don't take it negatively!

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 5:29 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 18.1 (Borders)

    Before I review this, I would like to say I haven't read this novel for a while (sorry bout that >.>) and some of the confusions I might have might ...

    Tue Jun 19, 2018 7:10 pm

  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic
    Re: Poem #2

    Hey, I'm here to leave short review. :D look at those aliens, aliens, aliens. The sentiment of looking at aliens is a funny one, imo, and repeating the word aliens ...

    Tue Jun 19, 2018 10:27 am

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (4/4)

    Hey! It's me! I'm going to finish this, yey! :D It finally came and he picked me up late that morning. When I got in the car I could tell ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 1:39 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (3/4)

    From relatable... I didn’t want to lay in bed; I’d done so much of that at the hospital. What would I do? Where would I go? I didn’t feel like ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 1:18 pm

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Ghost Man (2/4)

    Hey, I'm here again. Bear with me. :D Instant thought: can't help but to compare Rod with Liz. Obviously the latter is a much more likeable character, but I think ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:56 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (1/4)

    I wasn't planning to review this piece as I read, but I couldn't help notice things... so here's me noticing things. :D "God, I don't know what have done if....we're ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:39 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: build me a house

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D I'm not gonna lie - the lyrical aspect of this poem is what pulls me towards it. The rhyme in stanza one and three ...

    Sun Apr 01, 2018 5:04 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 31.2

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Benjamin! I'm so glad we see (well, hear) about him again. He's one of my favourite characters in the novel, and I was wondering ...

    Fri Mar 30, 2018 8:11 am

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Problems

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D So naturally I would comment on the structure of the poem. Putting it at the center doesn't seem to have any impact. If anything, ...

    Tue Mar 27, 2018 5:47 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 10 Part 3 (First Draft.)

    Hey, I'm here to review again with the same prepared apology in case I missed something I shouldn't. :D Earlier the police interrogated Cecilia and had mistaken her for being ...

    Sun Mar 25, 2018 4:30 pm


The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma.
— Patrick Star