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  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: Weight

    Hi! Sorry for being late! Here's the review as requested. :D She wrapped the coat tighter around her body in an effort to seek some of the warmth it was ...

    Fri Sep 24, 2021 2:57 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Faint Etches 1.1

    Hi, I'm here to review! It's been a while since I review, so the quality might plummet. ^^' The story is interesting from the starting. You've laid out a neat ...

    Mon Sep 02, 2019 3:30 pm

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Journey of My Heart

    Hi! It's me giving a quick review for this poem. :D I see no stanzas in this poem, so I suspect you have an issue with the formatting. It's pretty ...

    Fri Mar 22, 2019 5:39 pm

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Violet

    Hi! I'm here to leave a short review. :D 1st stanza: So the first line is good. Sufficiently interesting, if I may say so myself. The action and description is ...

    Sun Jan 13, 2019 7:51 am

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science
    Re: We yearned

    Hey! It's been a while since I reviewed your stuff, so let's get into this. :D Everything I've said is meant for improvement, so please don't take it negatively!

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 5:29 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 18.1 (Borders)

    Before I review this, I would like to say I haven't read this novel for a while (sorry bout that >.>) and some of the confusions I might have might ...

    Tue Jun 19, 2018 7:10 pm

  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic
    Re: Poem #2

    Hey, I'm here to leave short review. :D look at those aliens, aliens, aliens. The sentiment of looking at aliens is a funny one, imo, and repeating the word aliens ...

    Tue Jun 19, 2018 10:27 am

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (4/4)

    Hey! It's me! I'm going to finish this, yey! :D It finally came and he picked me up late that morning. When I got in the car I could tell ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 1:39 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (3/4)

    From relatable... I didn’t want to lay in bed; I’d done so much of that at the hospital. What would I do? Where would I go? I didn’t feel like ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 1:18 pm

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Ghost Man (2/4)

    Hey, I'm here again. Bear with me. :D Instant thought: can't help but to compare Rod with Liz. Obviously the latter is a much more likeable character, but I think ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:56 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (1/4)

    I wasn't planning to review this piece as I read, but I couldn't help notice things... so here's me noticing things. :D "God, I don't know what have done if....we're ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:39 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: build me a house

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D I'm not gonna lie - the lyrical aspect of this poem is what pulls me towards it. The rhyme in stanza one and three ...

    Sun Apr 01, 2018 5:04 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 31.2

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Benjamin! I'm so glad we see (well, hear) about him again. He's one of my favourite characters in the novel, and I was wondering ...

    Fri Mar 30, 2018 8:11 am

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Problems

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D So naturally I would comment on the structure of the poem. Putting it at the center doesn't seem to have any impact. If anything, ...

    Tue Mar 27, 2018 5:47 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 10 Part 3 (First Draft.)

    Hey, I'm here to review again with the same prepared apology in case I missed something I shouldn't. :D Earlier the police interrogated Cecilia and had mistaken her for being ...

    Sun Mar 25, 2018 4:30 pm


Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream.
— Mark Twain