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Hello Libby! Jade here to leave you a quick review. I loved this short little book, it had a good, unique hook to it. I love fiction, and I believe ...
Sep 30, 2022
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hEY CRAWLBOSS! Jade here to review your prose poem.. i love the imagery of this piece; hurricanes are such a good metaphor for emotions, with the eye of the storm ...
Sep 29, 2022
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Hi Vampire! I really liked this story, especially the bittersweet end to it. It feels like your writing has grown a lot these past few months, and I really like ...
Sep 28, 2022
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Hi crawlboss, Jade here to leave a short review on your cute short story, Lipstick. I really liked the plot twist, but I wish you had more buildup to it ...
Sep 27, 2022
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Hi Liberty! Jade here to leave you a short review on your poem. Your title was strange but it caught my attention! I love the flow of the stanzas, and ...
Sep 26, 2022
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Hi TrinityPoeting, Jade here to leave you a short review on your old (but cute!) poem. Let's get straight into it. Stanza one: you're spitting facts. Though the flow feels ...
Sep 25, 2022
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Hey Lib! Jade here to give you a short review on your work! I really liked this poem; not only was it relatable, but it played into lots of different ...
Sep 24, 2022
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Hi Libby! Jade here to give you a short review! I like this poem in its entirety, I think it's well written, the stanzas are pleasing and the poem is ...
Sep 23, 2022
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Hi Libby, this poem was adorable! I'm here to give it a quick review. The opening two lines were beautiful! I like how you spelt out the word happy, it's ...
Sep 21, 2022
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Hello Kelisot! Jade here to leave a review. I was really interested in a poem from a character's point of view, and I very much enjoyed it! I like the ...
Sep 20, 2022
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Hello! As someone who loves this movie and as someone who likes to look at old articles on YWS, I thought this would be the perfect thing to read. Let ...
Sep 20, 2022
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Hi Gem! Hannah here to review your lovely poem. Let's go ahead and get started! Starting with the format, I like how some lines are more blurry than others, I ...
Sep 20, 2022
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Hello Vampire, Jade here to leave a quick review on your awesome story. I'll keep this short and name a few things I liked, as well as a few improvements ...
Sep 20, 2022
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Liberty Mutual! Jade here to review your poem. The title caught my attention and I had to give it a look! While the title sounds more serious than the poem ...
Sep 20, 2022
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Hi Libby, Jade here to review your haikus! Let's get right into it. I loved your haikus and the way they told a story with a scary conclusion. The idea ...
Sep 19, 2022