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  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic
    Re: Non-Fiction or Fiction?

    Hello Libby! Jade here to leave you a quick review. I loved this short little book, it had a good, unique hook to it. I love fiction, and I believe ...

    Sep 30, 2022

  • Other » Literature, Other
    Re: hurricane

    hEY CRAWLBOSS! Jade here to review your prose poem.. i love the imagery of this piece; hurricanes are such a good metaphor for emotions, with the eye of the storm ...

    Sep 29, 2022

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hi Vampire! I really liked this story, especially the bittersweet end to it. It feels like your writing has grown a lot these past few months, and I really like ...

    Sep 28, 2022

  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic
    Re: Lipstick

    Hi crawlboss, Jade here to leave a short review on your cute short story, Lipstick. I really liked the plot twist, but I wish you had more buildup to it ...

    Sep 27, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Action / Adventure
    Re: Poem

    Hi Liberty! Jade here to leave you a short review on your poem. Your title was strange but it caught my attention! I love the flow of the stanzas, and ...

    Sep 26, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: why hide

    Hi TrinityPoeting, Jade here to leave you a short review on your old (but cute!) poem. Let's get straight into it. Stanza one: you're spitting facts. Though the flow feels ...

    Sep 25, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic
    Re: what to write?

    Hey Lib! Jade here to give you a short review on your work! I really liked this poem; not only was it relatable, but it played into lots of different ...

    Sep 24, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: Fear and Confidence

    Hi Libby! Jade here to give you a short review! I like this poem in its entirety, I think it's well written, the stanzas are pleasing and the poem is ...

    Sep 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Other, Other
    Re: The Ants That Made Me Smile

    Hi Libby, this poem was adorable! I'm here to give it a quick review. The opening two lines were beautiful! I like how you spelt out the word happy, it's ...

    Sep 21, 2022

  • Poetry » Literature, Satire
    Re: The Bisexual Sonnet of Jason Yilfein

    Hello Kelisot! Jade here to leave a review. I was really interested in a poem from a character's point of view, and I very much enjoyed it! I like the ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: Satire in 'But I'm A Cheerleader'

    Hello! As someone who loves this movie and as someone who likes to look at old articles on YWS, I thought this would be the perfect thing to read. Let ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Poetry » Health, Culture
    Re: pointing fingers

    Hi Gem! Hannah here to review your lovely poem. Let's go ahead and get started! Starting with the format, I like how some lines are more blurry than others, I ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The adventures of Poppy McLain-Two

    Hello Vampire, Jade here to leave a quick review on your awesome story. I'll keep this short and name a few things I liked, as well as a few improvements ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Blacked Out

    Liberty Mutual! Jade here to review your poem. The title caught my attention and I had to give it a look! While the title sounds more serious than the poem ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems

    Hi Libby, Jade here to review your haikus! Let's get right into it. I loved your haikus and the way they told a story with a scary conclusion. The idea ...

    Sep 19, 2022

Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate.
— Sigmund Freud